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Yaaaay! Page 4 is in the bag! :)

As always, thoughts, critiques are most welcome, especially regarding dialogue.

Thinking I might work on some color stuff for a change next...

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Agent00Soul

The dialogue works real well to establish Ash as a rebel - the pot story, bad language, etc. I'm guessing you are setting her up as sort of an "Evil Ed" character.