Biology 101 pg 42 WIP (Patreon)

I think I'm going to start putting the text on the early pages just so you guys can get an idea more of what's going on. ALSO to get better feedback on the writing.

Is the text too big?

Is the page too wordy?

Are they placed oddly?

Is the dialogue cringey? XD 

Anything that comes to mind please feel free to share. I do plan on changing the demon's font to a more hand drawn text so the one shown here now is just a placer. :)