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Biology 101 pg 39 Final (Patreon)

Published:
2017-08-12 01:51:14
Edited:
2017-09-13 03:12:55
Imported:
2021-06

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Hey everyone!

Here's the latest Sue page! Things aren't going to well in the lecture hall as you can see...at least someone's having a good time though XD

I would love some critiques if you have any. Part of this endeavor I've taken on was to become a better comic artist but ALSO a writer as well. It's tough to do both but I would love to know where I'm good in areas but also areas that could use improvement.

Thanks again guys! Have a great weekend! :)

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Wuschel

So dark. I love it. <3

Agent00Soul

Very interesting take. If Sue is now able to have an inner dialogue in wolf form it opens up some new avenues to take. For example, we could hear her dissapointment and frustration when she turns human again: the same style of drawn out transformation you specialize in but in reverse from werewolf to human. You could also do something between full moons where Sue, now conscious of both her identities, tries to reconcile them. Of course, she would have to become a much darker character.

Zockereinstein

If you go on with the "monstruous acts-monstruous nature" you will have to keep in mind that it will make the evolution of the story more complicated, as long as you will have to create something to avoid "the good guys" go hunt her down. In other words, a massacre like this would not be passed unnoticed, and the only realistic scenario is that she would be prosecuted until the bitter end ;).

wereworld
>>6662058

yes!! :) the in between cycles is where I hope to really show her progression from the sweet girl next door to something far darker and terrifying, to herself and others.