My first animation! (Patreon)

So over my xmas break I really wanted to break into the world of animating, I am very very new to it but I really want to get into it more, this is with about 16 hours of animating experience, I'd love to hear some feedback, I plan to add audio too but need to grab some better post software (photoshop sucks for video) anyway check the link below for that oh so high resolution 1080P video!

1080P: Here 

if that doesn't work clicky this: Here