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Okay, sitrep.  There’s a lot going on here right now, and I need to lay it all out in my head.

Penelope and I are here to kill all the Nawra, or failing that, retrieve Remus’s sword.  The Nawra here think that we are also Nawra, but they’re mostly wrong.

Remus is the ringleader of this whole thing.  He and his controlling slime are both bonkers-strong, and I doubt my soul-nab will work on them, even post-hatching.  We need to get Penelope to infect him, or I need to poison him.

Both of those things are a pain in the ass, though, because Theodora is a metamancer.  If I recall right, that’s magic about magic, or something?  It probably means she can detect the flow of mana really well, and she’ll notice if I pour from the Everfull or if Penelope activates her talent.  She’s slimed, and like Remus I’m not sure if I can just yoink her back to humanity.  The tattooed lady is strong.

Seong, meanwhile, is a poison expert, which is another nail in the coffin of using the Everfull.  Their soul is humungo, but the slime in them is young and weak.  I can probably just kill their slime with a soul-grab, but I have no idea how the human Seong will behave afterwards.  If they start acting suspicious when I free them, it could be bad.

Taline is a former hunter scout, like me.  I don’t know exactly how her power works, and to be safe we should probably find out before I start murdering anybody.  Her slime is pretty strong, but not quite Remus’s level; I might be able to just soul-yank her.  The real wild card is the boy, Melik. He doesn’t have a Nawra, but his mom does and seems to think he does too.  Does he have a talent like mine?  Did he figure things out and dodge them somehow?  Did he get lucky and eat a poison mushroom by accident?  I need to know why he is free and if we can use him to our advantage here.

Finally, there’s… well, all the rest of the villagers.  Over a dozen weak randos are also slimed around Litia village.  I figure we save them for last, though; I can probably just walk past them and thresh the slime souls with a tentacle.  A simple sweep of the island and we should be clean.

“What do you think, Vita?” Remus asks, snapping me out of my thoughts.  Oh yeah, I should be paying attention to this strategy meeting.

“Oh, uh… sorry, I kinda got distracted,” I admit sheepishly, scratching the back of my head.

“You need to be paying attention,” Remus insists, sending a stern look my way.  “You’re the linchpin of this operation.  If Penelope was successful in destroying the Burrow Hound colony, our brethren would have had to flee out of the tunnels before locating a new host.  If you can find those exits, they will be the best spots to start looking.”

I nod, pretending to think while I get in character.

“I can’t guarantee that, pops.  I sense living things and relative strength.  If there are new monsters that moved into the tunnels, I’ll be able to feel those.  If not, I can’t see underground any better than you can.”

“That’s what I thought,” he agrees, nodding.  “So we’ll have to rely on you, Taline, even with your lower range.”

Oh, perfect.

“Sorry, what all can Taline do, again?”

“Ha ha, I’m kind of a weird one,” Taline laughs cheerfully.  “My only talent is to pull things towards me.  I can vaguely feel whatever I’m pulling on, though, so I use it to scout by imperceptibly tugging on everything around me.  Took me a few years to get a handle on it, but now it’s second nature to me.”

It took her host a few years, she means.  She, as in the person actually talking, is probably only a few days old.

“How detailed is it?” I ask.

“Pretty detailed, now that I’m used to it.  It’s almost like a full picture of my surroundings.  It doesn’t go through objects like yours does, but we can use it to find burrow holes that are nearby.”

Perfect.  If I keep a wall between me and her, then, I shouldn’t have a problem on that front.

“Sounds handy!” I say.  “Go team double scout!”

She gives me an odd look for a second, then smiles back.

“Go team double scout!”

Remus chuckles.  His slime just seems so goddamn happy with all his kin around.  It kind of hurts to have to kill him.  Penta lightly squeezes my spine.  Yeah, there’s no way she doesn’t feel even worse than I do.  I almost give her a light pat with a tendril before remembering she doesn’t like that.

Someday, I will find someone that I can soul-snuggle.

During the rest of the meeting we cover our strategy for tackling the forest, though I don’t pay a ton of attention since I have no actual intention of participating in that mission.  Remus wants to leave tomorrow, but Penelope and I manage to negotiate him down to a few days from now to keep him in the village long enough to give us Gladra’s full time limit.  He doesn’t like it, but a lot of the others agree with our points; Penelope presses the idea that we need to practice working as a team for a bit rather than rush off after just meeting each other, and the argument sticks.

“I know you’re strong, Remus, and I know the others need rescuing,” Penelope affirms.  “They’re not going to die in the next couple of days, though, and if we’re not careful in the forest, we might.  You know better than anyone that there are things you can’t fight out there.  No matter how unlikely we are to run into them back where we found the burrow hounds, risking it out of impatience is stupid.”

The meeting ends soon after he relents.  I want to grab Melik and take him somewhere private to figure out his deal, but the kid’s mom grabs me first.

“Let’s chat at my place,” Taline insists.  “Scout to scout.”

I can’t help it, I glance at Penelope.  She meets my gaze and shrugs lightly.  May as well.  Yeah, that makes sense.  Getting them alone is more or less what we wanted, and while I don’t know if freeing Taline immediately is a wise plan yet, it would be good to get her comfy with me.

“Lead the way!” I answer cheerfully.  “I’d love to hear some professional tips!  Pops is more of a school of hard knocks kinda guy.”

She snorts, grinning a little.

“That he is.”

The wooden houses are interesting, and I’m surprised at how sturdy and clean Taline’s is when we get there.  Wood housing is almost invariably shitty in Skyhope, but I guess there’s no reason that has to be the case.  Something about stone being a status symbol, I think?  Eh, I don’t know shit about houses, I live in a shack.

Well… lived, I guess.  I suppose I don’t live there anymore, but it’s still my home.

“You have a very nice house,” I tell her seriously.

She laughs.

“Well, thank you!  I built it myself.”

I tilt my head.

“Not ‘my host built it herself?’”

She shrugs.

“Eh, same difference.  Now!  I wanted to ask you about your talent.  You can really see Nawra in people?”

“More or less, yeah,” I confirm again.  “It’s not really ‘seeing’ but that’s basically right.”

“Of course, of course.” she answers, nodding.  “So, how many of us are there here?”

I do a quick count, mentally adding one extra for Penelope and Melik each.

“Thirty-three, I think,” I answer.  “Unless there’s more out deeper in the fields than I can feel from here.”

“And you sense two in me,” she presses.  This is getting weird.  Didn’t I just say that in the meeting?

“Yep,” I confirm.  “Two in you.”

“And one in my son,” she continues.

I smile my best conwoman smile.

“Yep!”

She gives me an odd look, and I start to worry that I’ve fucked up.  She’s the one that introduced her son as slimed.  Wait… was that a ruse?  But why would she bring her human son to the strategy meeting if she knew?

“You’re covering for him,” Taline says.  “Why?  You don’t even know us.”

I blink.  So she does know?  Why is she—

“So you’re lying to Remus about him?” Penta asks, suddenly asserting control.

My tendrils shiver at the sudden takeover, though it’s much easier to detach myself from the need to control my body when I have something else to move instead.  I almost chastise Penta for yanking my body away again, but I suppose we did agree to share more.

“I… I am, yes,” Taline admits.  “I can’t let someone else control him.  You’re not going to tell anyone, right?”

Her question wasn’t asked out of fear, but as a warning.  I won’t have to stop you from telling him, right?  In a normal situation it might be threatening.  The short, stocky woman is more than a match for Penta and I in soul strength, though at this distance I could probably kill the slime without trouble.  Thankfully, there’s no need for that yet.  I’m just surprised, and a little disturbed.

“I won’t,” Penta confirms.  “But why?  Won’t he tell someone?”

She shakes her head.

“He won’t.  He’s a good boy.  Even if he wasn’t, there’s no way I can let a Nawra into him.  He’s my son.

Penta moves my lips into a frown.

“I see.  Your host loves him very much, so you… also do.”

“Exactly.  Yes!  You understand.  I could never let someone replace him.  I had to tell him about us.  I had to keep him safe.”

Penta chews on that for a while as I watch with interest.

“So… how does he feel about you possessing his mother?”

She swallows.

“He… he doesn’t know.”

Penta raises an eyebrow.

“I lied to him,” Taline continues.  “I said that I used my power to pull the Nawra away from my neck.”

I make it known that I want control of the body back, and Penta reluctantly relents.

“Would you say that your host is a good liar?” I ask bluntly.

“When she has to be, yes.  Why?”

Good enough for me.  As interesting as it is for her to have mercy on her son, she’s in our way.  I reach a hand out, moving my soul down the arm in order to extend the range of my tendrils far enough to reach into the woman’s body.  At least until Penta seizes control of my arm, dropping it and taking a step back.

Excuse me? I think at her.

“D-do you think there’s any chance that you and your host can work together?” Penta asks quickly.  “You know you’re torturing her in there, right?  Melik loves her, not you, and you’re torturing her.  I-If you love him back, you should—”

“I can’t, Vita,” Taline’s slime says.  “She’ll kill me.  You know that.  That’s what hosts do.

Can I kill her now? I grumply press.

“Don’t you think we could find a better way?” Penta begs us both.  “If we just had more time?  If we could just get people to cooperate?”

We don’t have time, and most people don’t cooperate unless you make them anyway.

“No amount of time is going to make my host like me.  What are you on about?”

Penta takes another step backwards.  I glare at her from within.

You can’t wimp out about our mission now, Penta.  We’re not going to have a better opportunity.  Give me control.

“Why me and not her?” Penta whispers.

You know why.  Now give me control, you’re making us look suspicious again.

“But—”

Give.  Me.  Control.

Penta hesitates, and to my surprise, disobeys.  I glower internally, firmly resisting the urge to end her.  She wouldn’t outright fuck us over.

“How about this,” Penta says quickly. “You help me with something, Taline, and I’ll be sure to keep the secret about your son.”

The woman frowns, but nods.

“Anything for Melik.  What do you need?”

“Well, in the absence of a better option for coexistence… I at least want to celebrate what we’ve built here,” Penta improvises desperately.  “I want help making a feast for everyone.  Eat some good food, have a toast… that kind of thing.  In honor of family.”

Oh!  She’s setting up an opportunity to poison everyone!  Well, okay, go Penta!  Taline laughs.

“Ah, is that it?  You’re a good kid.  That sounds great!  And here I thought I was about to get blackmailed out the ass.”

Penta smiles the pleasant smile she no doubt learned from Penelope.

“I don’t know much about preparing food or any of that, I’m afraid.  I had the idea but I’ll be foisting almost all the work on you.”

The stocky older woman flexes an impressive bicep.

“Leave it to me, little lady!  I’ll whip up the best damn feast you’ve ever seen!”

Hrm.  Well, as Penta walks us out of the house, I can’t help but note that she got us both what we wanted.  The mom-slime lives another day, so that we can better kill them all at once.  It’s better to get the mom-slime to participate in our plan for us, as there’s less risk of accidental discovery.  The woman trapped inside is probably living in constant horror, but… well, I don’t know her.  I’m not going to go out of my way to release her early when it worsens our chances.  It would be one thing if she was dying or likely to suffer some permanent harm, but another day of torture on top of those she’s already had probably won’t make a big difference.

“Vita, you do realize that mental trauma is potentially permanent harm, right?”

Fuck, Penta, do you want me to kill her or not?

“Of course not!” she hisses.  “I don’t want the humans to suffer and I don’t want the Nawra to die!  Why is that so hard to understand?”

It’s easy to understand.  We just don’t have any way to accomplish it.

“She’s a slime that loves a human!  There has to be something there!”

Maybe, but if we waste time looking for it things will get way worse.  Look, I know this doesn’t sit well with you, but I REALLY can’t have you fucking up the operation.  You realize that will just get everyone here killed, plus us?  I figure that if they die around me I can at least maybe make them revenants later.

My face frowns.

“You’re not just going to eat them?” Penta asks.

I mean, I wanna eat the big ones, but… we’ll see.  We can work something out.  Now gimme my body back before Penelope sees us and makes you explode.  And DON’T try this shit with Seong.  The poison expert being on our side is non-negotiable and you know that.

She detaches from my spine completely, perhaps to think without my mind getting in the way.  Fine by me.  The person I need alone next is definitely Seong.  I feel where they are and start heading their way.  Annoyingly, however, I’m cut off by someone else first.

“Hey,” Melik says, the young boy looking down from nearly a foot over my height.  “Um, Vita, right?  Can we talk?”

I sigh.

“Sure, what do you need?”

“I was wondering…” he mumbles sheepishly, scratching the back of his head.  “Can I see your artifact?”

My artifact?  As in, the Everfull with all the Nawra poison that would definitely make Remus think something is up and fuck over everything?  As in the artifact I’ve made absolutely sure to never once take out or use since I’ve gotten here?

“Let’s make sure our chat is private,” I answer, smiling as broadly as I can.

Comments

Gore17

first Edit: Holy shit, first both here and RR?

Anonymous

Thanks for the chapter!

Anonymous

Thanks for the chapter! Well this is a pickle at best. And Rick isn’t even involved. If the Narwa could let their hosts read their memories that same way the slime do, then maybe some humans might understand enough to make a deal. But thats a lot of ifs, plus the trauma of being controlled.

Anonymous

So you don't want to just throw the Narwa's into criminals and objectively bad people because they'll half-become them. But what if you soul-sucked them first? Would they still get the hosts memories/personality from the body, or is it some kind of soul-reading.

thundamoo

If Vita uses her soul-grab ability on someone, they die. Nawra can't possess corpses because they interface biologically.

Satya Prateek

The Nawra are fucked up.... eugh. Ngl this is a compelling arc but the extent to which Taline-slime thinks she's the original is disturbing

Heraclitus

I'm guessing I won't be the only person (once again) incredibly frustrated by Petra and Vita. With Petra constantly and brazenly abusing the undeserved goodwill that Vita provides her and Vita passively allowing the obvious danger and slap in the face of such actions.

Ato

dislike of penta rises

Paul Jaeger

Shame on Penta for being empathetic towards her own kind. Killing the Nawra is totally not morally ambiguous with them becoming a reflection of the people they possess. Especially since they have the choice between losing their sapience and death.

Anonymous

This is starting to be a bit much I think

Anonymous

I dont think penta a bad charakter but god is she anoying always ackting up in front of other people putting her host in danger its like those mc that just charge at their enemy and win with the power of frendship just a rant realising my frustration noting more nothing les

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

Anonymous

Haaaa seems like this one is a miss too. I really appreciate this book but there are certain tropes I cannot stand. Slave MC or MC subordinate to another's will, toxic relationship and MCs with poor forethought especially regarding survival. I drop almost any novel with any of these characteristics. I am not sure I can continue with this one if this continues.

Anonymous

Fucking penta. For The Mistwalkers sake just kill her already.

thundamoo

So much Penta hate! I feel like I haven't done this arc the justice it deserves and made a few dumb mistakes along the way, but overall I'd like to request people stick around until the arc completes. Which... will be soon.

Alina

i was neutral on penta until now, but i officially hate her now. not only did she know and think on the whole travel here that they slimes must die. and she knows precisely why, she herself even agreed its a good reason AND knows the chance of coexistence is non-negotiable, AND AND knew vita has considered making them revenants back at the slums when vitamin was made! ....and yet still risks getting them both killed by continually disobeying vita, even knowing vita can, and will have no qualms about, killing you..... penta, your intelligence has now hit the level of plant, i cant even.....

Melting Sky

There was no risk here for anyone but Penta. Vita could instakill both Penta and Slime Mom in like half a second if Penta screwed this up and things went south. Penta basically risked her own life to try and save one of her people. -Shrug- It certainly was risky for her individually, but it's far from the most unwise thing I've seen someone do. At least her heart's in the right place even if she is taking unnecessary risks as a result of it. She really is a bit too kind-hearted for her own good. That along with her impulsiveness are probably traits she assimilated from Vita.

Anonymous

It's worth noting that nobody is really complaining about the writing, world-building, etcetera, but rather the characterization of Penta and Vita's relationship.

Anonymous

I guess unlike the others, I wish there were more instances of Penta control, we haven't seen much of Penta's personality or actions yet, currently, we've only seen Penta do things like taking over to speak at bad moments, which makes sense considering she's also part Vita now, and without being in control she's in a bad sort of limbo state, if we see more of Penta, perhaps using learnt Biomancy to help the kids or the situation or using more of Penelope style Diplomacy, people will grow more attached to her. I don't understand all of the Penta hate though, seems a bit like the loud minority situation. Her actions and hesitation make sense. If she's seen as ungrateful for the way she's acting, just compare it to a kid under 18 complaining to their parents(which some see as ungrateful), also if we see her being more submissive due to being at Vita's mercy, I think that would take away from a lot of the charm that Penta has.

Alina

people dont hate her for being *her* they hate how dumb shes being. so far quite literally every single thing shes ever done is the WORST thing she could do in the situation. even worse is the fact she does the worst thing even though she knows why she shouldn't or cant do that

11037

I don't understand all the hate against Penta. She's a good person trapped in a cage, doomed by her nature, and is understandably lashing out. Why do readers get angry when she asserts herself and shows personality instead of being a slave?

Anonymous

she interfere at every important moment and penta know that its dangerous to do it in many of those moments so she actively putting her savior in danger this too was risky as the other could scream out loudly at any moment and they would have been discovered personal i find her annoying but a good written character hope this helped

Anonymous

A lot of people are basing the 'Kill all the narwa' point on the fact that the narwa are completely parasitic and have not possible use to humanity. But magic can be learned, right? As in, anyone making the correct hand and voice gestures can cast super powerful magic? So correct me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't they have a massive potential to learn All the types of magic, then give it to Everybody? Like, if you had just one person who was totally content in a subordinate roll, and who also knew magic, you could just push slime after slime into that person and wait until they had taken on their personality and power. The slimes wouldn't even have to take control. Admitedly, the new hosts would have to be the kind of people who would rather co-operate than control in order to maintain that proper relationship, but... Imagine the benifite. In war, having trained foot soldiers able to become artillery mages at a second's notice. Cooking, dancing, wagon-driving, etc etc etc. They could become a repository of skills, much like some posit AI would be. And all you would need would be 1. A willing and naturally subordinate person to indoctrinate the slimes, and 2. A test or tester who could tell if the slimes were in control at any one point. If the human ever says "No, it took me over" or the slime doesn't let him talk, just kill the slime. Simple, beautiul, and wildly powerful.

Anonymous

Or with the Cognomancy side of animancy (messing with minds), the slime could also give anyone by copying it over. Or more legal/practical, find someone with an extremely high sense of honour and duty (or a programmed mind) or loyalty something similar (considering Penta and Taline bypassed any instinct to be parasites completely), an extremely strong will, and let the slime take on those personality traits. Plus the person can be fully informed of the purpose with the slimes so the slimes can cooperate by knowing what the alternative is and why the precautions. Then one the base personality is set, let them read other knowledge of a host of different subject and become and ultimate agent. Or if you did it for you won personally, when someone is dying, make them aware of the plane and Narwa, get a fresh slime and get it to fully copy them, letting them hop bodies over their lifetime so they could be some eternal ruler or something. In the case of Vita, trying to mimic the soul part of how a Narwa works herself so she could extract knowledge from the soul she collects.

Anonymous

I actually like Penta's character and believe her actions make sense from her point of view.

Anonymous

Me too, man. I think there's a good amount of people who like where this is going. But you know how the negatives can be louder than the positives. I hope the author sticks with his vision. This story is super fascinating.