Mo Dao Zu Shi rereading commentary || chapters 114extra-119extra (Patreon)

Chapter 114: Extra—Banquet (Part One)

Lan WangJi looked at him, as though he wanted to say something. Wei WuXian immediately added, “Fine, I know. No walking too fast, no speaking too loud, no this, no that, am I right?

Don’t worry. Now that I’m back with you, I’ll definitely be as careful as possible to not violate any of the sect rules on your Wall. As careful as possible.”

Lan WangJi didn’t even think about it, “It is fine. Even if you violate them…”

Wei WuXian keenly picked up, “Hm?”

Lan WangJi seemed as if he finally realized that what he said wasn’t too appropriate. He turned his head to the side for a moment before turning back, his face serious, “… Nothing.”

dflkgjdlfk!!!! The way he wants to say that he's allowed to break the rules but at the same time realizes that it's not such a good idea! HE LUVS HIM SO MUCH

When he thought so, Wei WuXian finally realized that he’d never cared to notice whether Lil’ Apple was male or female. He couldn’t help but glance at it. But before he could get a nice view, he suddenly heard something and turned around to look.

You should've gotten a view Wei Wuxian! Because of you we don't know how to address Little Apple!

Known for its stringentness, the GusuLan Sect had recited things like men and women were different and thus should not be over-intimate with each other for tens of thousands of times by the ears of its disciples.

Lan Wangji had no choice but be gay, sorry.

Wei WuXian, How did Lan Zhan feed the rabbits? Since when did he start taking care of them? Did he also come over here, holding a little basket?

Shaking a few scenes overloaded with cuteness out of his head

CUTENESS OVERLOAD

“…” Lan WangJi looked down at him, “Get up.”

Wei WuXian tossed the carrot backwards, lazily extending a hand, “Pull me up.”

With a pause, Lan WangJi reached out to pull him, yet Wei WuXian suddenly exerted strength and pulled him down instead.

Their territory having been seized by strange humans, the rabbits seemed as though they faced a great enemy, aimlessly running around the two piled on the ground.

This scene is so cute, they're such a perfect funny couple, I wanna draw it hahaha

“The seventh sect rule on the Wall of Rules of the Cloud Recesses—disturbing female cultivators is prohibited.”

Wei WuXian, “You said it’s fine even if I violate them.”

Lan WangJi, “I did not.”

Wei WuXian, “Why are you like this? Just because you didn’t finish your sentence means you never said it? What happened to the HanGuang-Jun who always did what he promised?”

Lan WangJi, “‘Everyday’.”

Guys, this is serious, in the past chapters Lan Wangji answered Wei Wuxian with witty sassy comebacks A LOT of times! Look at Lan Er Gege getting his own refined sense of humor! Who was that 15 year old Lan Wangji? What did you do to him??

Wei WuXian, “I know it’s punishment. I can see that they’re copying the Lan Sect’s rules—I’ve memorized Righteousness already. What did they do to be punished?”

Lan WangJi’s voice was cool, “They returned to the Cloud Recesses after the prescribed

time limit.”

Wei WuXian, “Oh.”

Lan WangJi, “They accompanied General Ghost on a night-hunt.”

Wei WuXian, “Hah! You’ve really got guts.”

Lan WangJi, “For the third time.”

Something in the sassy authoritative manner Lan Wangji reports to Wei Wuxian what the juniors did, when they're right there

Wei WuXian wanted to give Lan SiZhui’s shoulder a few pats, but there was no place for him to put his hand. After a pause, he put his hand underneath and patted from bottom to top, confident, “I knew it.”

LMAO PATTED IT FROM BOTTOM TO TOP

Lan WangJi walked before the boys, glancing at their papers to examine them somewhat. He spoke to Lan JingYi, “The script is improper.”

Ohhhh Hanguang Jun the strict mentor. So elegant, so cool, so cruel ;^;

Hold on Jingyi!

The rest who hadn’t been picked on had passed the examination. All of them let out sighs of relief. As the two left the hallway, Wei WuXian recalled the suffering he went through when he himself received punishment back then, feeling quite sorry, “Just maintaining the position is hard enough. I might not be able to write when I’m upside-down. And I might not be able to write properly even when I’m sitting.”

Lan WangJi glanced at him, “Indeed.”

LAN ZHAN CHILL WITH THOSE BURNS WTFFFF XDDDDD

Wei WuXian grinned, “I thought your shocking arm strength was trained by this.”

Lan WangJi, “There was no punishment. But it was still trained by this.”

Wei WuXian wondered, “Why would you do handstands if you’re not punished?”

Lan WangJi stared straight forward, “It calms the mind.”

Wei WuXian was right beside Lan WangJi’s ear, his voice almost like a hook, “Then what exactly was it that made the icy HanGuang-Jun feel less than calm?”

Classic Lan Wangji. Find the benefit in the punishment for self improvement and do it even if you're not punished.
Also spot on Wei Wuxian! hahahaha

Can't believe he had such huge gay panics for Wei Wuxian that he just left everything and went to punish and calm himself with headstands hahahaha

BTW I also believe that the first day Lan Wangji took Wei Wuxian to Cloud Recesses after Dafan Mountain, when he put him in the Jingshi and went to the cold springs to mediate, I think he totally did that to calm down his HUGEEEE excitement and joy hahaha

Chapter 115: Extra—Banquet (Part Two)

“HanGuang-Jun, why don’t you even resist a bit? If you’re just lying there not even moving, what’s the fun of me raping you?”

Lan WangJi’s muffled voice came through the blanket, “What do you want me to do?”

He is SOOO not participating in this if he has to take the submissive part LMAO

Wei WuXian, “Then you can call for help lightly. And also, when I rip your clothes apart, you should try your best to resist and protect your chest.”

The blanket was silent for a while.

A moment later, Lan WangJi replied, “It sounds rather difficult.”

Wei WuXian, “Really?!”

Lan WangJi, “Mn.”

Wei WuXian, “I’m out of ideas, then. How about we change things up and you rape me instead…”

Before he finished, his view spun and the blankets flew off. Lan WangJi had already pushed him onto the bed.

Lan Zhan you are so OBVIOUS. Good thing Wei Wuxian really loves it when you pound him hard so he doesn't mind your rude lack of cooperation. But LMAO the speed with which he jumped on Wei Wuxian when the suggestion turned another way. OBVIOUS! Have I said it?!

Lan WangJi straightened up slightly, “Why do you not resist?”

Wei WuXian squeezed his waist with his legs, rubbing slowly and refusing to let him leave. He grinned, “Well what can I do? When you push me down, my legs open themselves involuntarily. I can’t close them at all, so how do I have the strength to resist? It’s hard for you, but it’s hard for me too…

WEI WUXIAN YOU SLU-------

In the few months he and Wei WuXian begun living together, he’d tried to set Wei WuXian’s sleeping habits right, but it was always in vain.

LMAO the domestic vibes of a person trying to change his spouse's bad habits XDDD I THOUGHT YOU ACCEPT HIM AS HE IS LAN ZHAN

The food of the Cloud Recesses was something that Wei WuXian had once encountered. With watery broth and vegetables as the main dish, it was green and only green across the table, full of medicinal herbs ranging from root to bark. Every single dish emitted a pungent bitterness, and amid that bitterness was an odd tinge of sweet. If it weren’t for this, back then Wei WuXian wouldn’t have gotten the idea to barbeque the two rabbits either. A banquet at their sect probably wouldn’t do much to satisfy one’s hunger.

Reminds me of this drawing

Wei WuXian knew that the GusuLan Sect valued this aspect of things quite heavily. Whether or not they let him attend the sect banquet was basically whether or not they acknowledged his status as Lan WangJi’s partner in cultivation. Lan WangJi definitely pressed Lan QiRen over and over again to gain him such a right. He let out a breath and grinned, “Don’t worry. I’ll definitely do my best and not lose face for you.”

This is so sad actually ;____;

I'm glad they accepted him into the banquet but I know that Lan Qiren, still, opposes this relationship. The way Wei Wuxian decided to stop his shenanigans because now he knows that everything he does won't involve him alone but Lan Wangji too, is so precious! The best husband <333

Nie HuaiSang 172 (5’8)

Jin GuangYao 170 (5’7)

From the height chart. So you mean to tell me that we all laugh at Jin Guangyao for being short, when Nie Huaisang isn't that far behind!?

Chapter 116: Extra—Banquet (Part Three)

Seeing this, Wei WuXian felt his heart grow wings. Momentarily relaxed, he was just about to lean against Lan WangJi uncontrollably when a harsh cough suddenly came from Lan QiRen. Wei WuXian immediately straightened his half-slanted body, returning to the proper seating posture.

Hahahahaha this old man is so funny

Lan JingYi, “Senior Wei, we did not ignore you on purpose, but Sir said anyone whoever talks to you will copy the Lan Sect’s rules from top to bottom…”

‘Sir’ was the honorific by which all disciples and cultivators of the GusuLan Sect referred to Lan QiRen. Any mention of ‘Sir’ meant him and only him. Wei WuXian gloated, “It’s fine, I knew. It’s not the first day your Sir is fireproof, thief-proof, and Wei-Ying-proof. You’ve seen his success rates? He probably feels like his well-nurtured cabbage was dug up by a pig. It’s only natural he’s a bit more fiery than usual, hahahaha…”

I know it's supposed to be funny but I still find it sad that Lan Qiren did that and that the juniors have to avoid Wei Wuxian despite all that they've been through together with him :(

Following Jin GuangYao’s death, the most pure-blooded heir of the LanlingJin Sect was Jin Ling. However, there were still many elders in side branches of the sect that watched hungrily, eager for the opportunity. The LanlingJin Sect was scorned by others on the outside, and on the inside held a mixture of different self interests. Jin Ling was still young. How could he keep everything down? In the end, Jiang Cheng still went up Koi Tower, Zidian in hand, and walked once around, for him to finally be able to temporarily secure his position as sect leader. As for what would happen in the days to come, nobody knew.

Jiang Cheng, here, you dropped your crown.

Lan JingYi pouted, “They seem pretty fine. Sect Leader Jiang is the same as before, always lashing out at people with his whip. Young Mistress’s temper has been getting better. In the past he could talk back thrice to his uncle after he scolds him once. Now he can do ten times.”

Lan SiZhui reproached, “JingYi, how could you call someone like that behind their back?”

Lan JingYi protested, “I clearly call him the same thing to his face.”

STAHPPPP THIS IS THE FUNNIEST MOMENT IN THE ENTIRE NOVEL HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

At last, Lan WangJi took out a pair of ivory white chopsticks and placed them horizontally over the bowl, his voice cool, “Speech is forbidden when dining.”

Wei WuXian, “And you say speech is forbidden when sleeping. Every night when I say so much and make so much noise why have you never stopped me?”

Ohhhhhhhhh ohohohohohohooo!!

“…” Lan WangJi, “Eat first.” After a pause, he added, “We can do it after you finish.”

Wei WuXian, “I’ll eat the cabbage first.”

Lan WangJi frowned slightly, as though he was confused as to why he’d mention cabbages so suddenly. Wei WuXian laughed as he curled his arm around his neck.

Those so-called banquets were best held behind shut doors.

At first reading I really thought that Wei Wuxian meant the real cabbages in the dishes Lan Wangji brought, and yes, I knew he meant the joke about his relationship with Lan Wangji, but I still thought he meant to eat the cabbages Lan Wangji brought as referring to that joke.

BUT NOW I REALIZE HE ACTUALLY MEANT TO EAT LAN WANGJI. THAT EVEN THOUGHT HE'S STARVING, HE STILL CHOSE SEXY TIME WITH LAN WANGJI FIRST.

Chapter 117: Extra—Incense Burner

Wei WuXian crawled up from the ground, “What’s this place?”

Lan WangJi, “Not the real world.”

Wei WuXian, “Not the real world? No way,” he shook his sleeve, feeling it quite clearly, “What could this be if not reality?”

Lan WangJi didn’t answer. He walked in silence towards a river and gestured for him to look down. Wei WuXian walked over and glanced at his reflection. He was immediately startled.

Reflected against the river’s surface was how he looked in his past life!

OK it's him from his first life AND?! I mean, why don't we get any more excitement about that? This is something that baffled me in Mo Dao Zu Shi. I know that transmigration is a known concept in danmei and other Chinese novels, but I always wondered how little does the appearance mean. I know Lan Wangji loves Wei Wuxian no matter what, but let's be honest, he fell in love with Wei Wuxian in a certain body with a certain face. Of course suffering 13 years without him and suddenly having him back in another body is not that big of a deal, as long as he's here again, but in a moment like this for example, Lan Wangji sees his old face, the face he fell in love with and the face that he went through all those hardships before, the face he kissed, the face he saved and couldn't save - AND HE JUST TREATS IT SO "MEH?"

CAN SOMEONE EXPLAIN THIS?!

“…” Lan WangJi stared at the two making casual conversation, “Your dream?”

Wei WuXian was laughing so hard he might suffer from an internal injury, “Pwahahahahahahahaha, uh, yes. For a certain period of time, for some reason, I keep on having these dreams. I’d dream that we retired to seclusion to the countryside. I go out to hunt and farm, while you stay at home to guard the house, weaving and cooking food for me. Oh right, you’re also in charge of my money and doing accounts for me. At night you even mend my clothes. Every time I dream about telling you to boil the bathwater so that we could bathe together at night, but every time we were about to take off our clothes I’d wake up. What a shame, hahahahahahahahahahaha…”

He didn’t at all feel embarrassed that such a dream was seen by Lan WangJi. Instead, he was quite pleased with himself. Seeing how giddy he was, Lan WangJi’s eyes grew soft, “One might as well.”

This dream of Wei WuXian’s was full of trivial odds and ends, like cooking, eating, feeding chicken, cutting firewood. As expected, when the bathwater had finished boiling, the dream halted abruptly.

How can Wei Wuxian be such a wild, loud, shameless spirit, and at the same time be so childishly naive? It's the same as what I wrote about him choosing the names for the song Lan Wangji composed. This dream too, so wholesome, so innocent, and he's pleased with himself for dreaming it! And deep down Lan Wangji knows what dreams HE had on the other hand hahaha

This is truly amazing, how everybody thinks that Wei Wuxian is the perverted one, when in reality he's the naive and innocent, and the quiet, restrained and ascetic Lan Wangji IS THE REAL PERVERT!

If this situation was neither something that really happened nor one of his dreams, it had to be one of Lan WangJi’s dreams. Wei WuXian enjoyed the spectacle, “Lan Zhan, you get me so much. This is indeed something I’d say.”

Actually yeah, that entire made up dialogue Lan Wangji had in his dream is really true to Wei Wuxian character, cause he knows just what things Wei Wuxian would say that would drive him crzay and make him want to #$^$%^$%^$%$#% the other to oblivion hahaha

Lan Zhan grabbed his wrists, pressing his body onto his back. His voice was low, “What, did you, want to teach me?”

Oh........hohohoho!

Lan Zhan was indifferent, “Who said I do not understand?”

Wei Ying raised a brow, smirking, “Ohhhhh, really? Stop being so stubborn. It’d be beyond mind-blowing if you actually do hahahahahaha… Ah!”

He suddenly exclaimed, for Lan Zhan suddenly gripped a part of him down below.

Lan Zhan’s handsome yet still somewhat callow features were cold as he repeated, “Who said I do not understand?”

This part, when you think about it being Lan Wangji's dream, I can't help but to think that it was something he wanted to prove Wei Wuxian that he actually knew. When this incident happened in reality, Wei Wuxian boasted how he's seen many of those and therefore, as a man, knows more than Lan Wangji. Perhaps at that time Lan Wangji really didn't see such material before, but we do learn that later he knew just what to do with Wei Wuxian when having sex with him, meaning that he did probably see some books later sometime.

I think that after he saw it, and learned it, he probably "went back" to that incident in his dream, trying to "fix" it, defending his ego and showing Wei Wuxian that he DOES know.

It happened to me to. In high school, I had a crush, who loved me back, but I was to introverted and shy to actually take the relationship further. We ended on a very ugly way with him saying some stuff about me, how I'm difficult and not easy going etc etc. After school ended, for years, I kept having dreams about him. In reality, I started working with people, putting make up, dressing up, acting in more feminine and open way, and in my dreams of him it was also me meeting him as my current self and "proving" him how wrong he was with his evaluation of me.

This is the way I interpret the beginning of Lan Wangji's dream.

He lay amongst the books scattered on the ground, wrists bound together and weakly fixed above his head. His red ribbon had long since disappeared. Hair disheveled, he was on the verge of crying, tears blurring his squinting eyes.

This is the first time in the novel that it's mentioned that Wei Wuxian had a red hair ribbon. Since it's the extras MXTX wrote after finishing editing the novel, I wonder if the serialization and the need to have a visual appearance for the characters for publication purposes played a role in strengthening the image of the characters in her head.

Lan WangJi picked him up so that Wei WuXian sat on him. The weight of his body made Wei WuXian swallow the rod even deeper, so deep that his brows knit together and his face twitch slightly. He quickly diverted his attention to riding Lan WangJi, adjusting his position. He no longer had the spare energy to spout shameless comments.

WHY IS THIS SO HOT

He then lowered his head and held the spot of red at Wei WuXian’s left chest into his lips, nipping gently. As Wei WuXian swallowed his member in and out, the wet, purplish rod disappeared again and again into the deep crevice. It felt so good his scalp tingled.

Over there, Lan Zhan stared for a while at Wei Ying, who seemed like he was about to pass out. Suddenly, he tore apart the clothes in front of him and pinched the pink at his left chest before burying into his body again.

So. The real Lan Wangji dreamed the dream and knew what's about to come (the left nipple bite) and he did it on real Wei Wuxian too before their dream versions did it hahahaha

Wei Ying cried, “Lan Zhan, I was wrong, I was wrong. I shouldn’t have called you an amateur, I shouldn’t have said you didn’t understand, I won’t teach you anymore. Lan Zhan, Lan Zhan did you hear me? Second Young Master Lan, Lan Er-gege…”

Hearing the sweet, nasal tone of the last word, Lan Zhan’s motions slowed slightly. He indeed showed some mercy. With blurred eyes, he drew towards Wei Ying’s face and gently kissed his thin, pleading lips.

THE WAY HE CAN'T RESIST BEING CALLED ER GEGE

Wei Ying, “… Ge… Er-Gege… Lan Er-Gege… Pl-… Please…”

Lan Zhan caught his breath, his voice deep, “What?”

Wei Ying cupped his cheeks and kissed unstoppably, whispering, “Do it up there, just like before, hit that spot, alright…?”

ExR's version of Wei Ying's words sounds really soft, sweet and gentle. However in 7seas it goes like:

Wei Ying cupped his face and littered it with kisses. "...Ram me right in that spot, right where you just did," he whispered. "Fuck me right there, won't you...?"

This version sounds more obscene and it really fits Wei Wuxian's manner of speech during sex in their real life, however here the situation is different. It's young Wei Ying who was subdued, it's Lan Wangji's interpretation of Wei Ying's words and actions in such a situation, so the soft version of ExR can indeed fit more, if one reads the context.

I really wonder what the original chinese version says.

Wei WuXian let out a breath of relief. It felt wonderful, yet his back and buttocks weren’t made of steel. After messing about for so long, watching the two younger ones, he was pretty much drained of all energy. Yet, Lan WangJi didn’t pull out just yet. Instead, still inside of him, he adjusted him into another position.

Wei WuXian, “HanGuang-… Jun?”

Lan WangJi let out a small smile. He approached his ear and said a few soft words.

Wei WuXian, “… Umm, wait? By fuck him all the way, I meant for the young Lan Zhan in your dream to fuck the me in the dream all the way? I didn’t mean… Lan Zhan? Er-Ge-… Ge? Spare me!!!”

Listen. LISTEN!!!!! The mere image of Lan Wangji doing that, whispering the dirty words Wei Wuxian said back to his ear, IS SOMETHING THAT TURNS ME SO FERAL. I NEED TO DRAW THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Chapter 118: Extra—Villainous Friends

Xue Yang reached out with the hand wrapped in a black glove, extended a finger, and wagged it, “That depends on what you compare them against. Something like this—let alone Wen Ning, they wouldn’t even last long against the average fierce corpses that Wei WuXian controlled with his flute.”

I get so happy and proud when Wei Wuxian's genius is talked about.

He took out something from within his sleeve and passed it to Xue Yang, “Perhaps you need this?”

As he skimmed through what it was, Xue Yang’s body suddenly sat upright from the chair, “Wei WuXian’s manuscripts?”

Jin GuangYao, “That’s right.”

Xue Yang flipped through the pages, his eyes glowing. Soon, he looked up, “Is this really his actual manuscripts? The ones he wrote when he was nineteen?”

Jin GuangYao, “Of course. Everyone fought for it as hard as they could. It took me quite some effort to gather all of them.”

Xue Yang is such a huge fanboy of Wei Wuxian sldkfjlskdjg

As though he suddenly remembered something, he fixed his cap, accidentally touching the area of purple hidden at his forehead. Xue Yang gloated, “So what exactly is up with that forehead of yours?”

Jin GuangYao, “I’ve said already. It’s a long story.”

Jin GuangShan always threw his tasks whether big or small onto Jin GuangYao’s shoulders, while he indulged himself nights in a row, making Madam Jin throw her rage all around Koi Tower. When Jin ZiXuan was there, he could be the mediator between his parents, but right now it was already past the point of no turning back between the two. Every time Jin GuangShan went out and fooled around with women, he’d use Jin GuangYao to cover him and look for excuses. Madam Jin couldn’t catch him, so she vented on Jin GuangYao instead, shattering an incense burner today and spilling a cup of tea tomorrow. And so, in order for him to be able to live a few more safe days on Koi Tower, Jin GuangYao had to go to brothels himself and retrieve Jin GuangShan on time.

Classic human psychology. You experience abuse be certain people, and then you become abusive of people weaker than you.

Xue Yang responded lazily, “You were asking for it. If anyone dared say I was raised by a whore, I’d find his mom first, fuck her a couple hundred times, then drag her out and throw her into a whorehouse for others to fuck a couple hundred times. Then we’ll see which of us was really the one raised by a whore. Simple.”

One thing I appreciate MXTX for is that she writes her characters in such a credible way. Hearing what Xue Yang says here, you'd never believe that this line was thought of and written by a woman, but she spared us nothing and tried to teach us no moralism through Xue Yang. It's great, and I really respect it.

Jin GuangYao’s voice was warm, “ChengMei*, please hold your tongue for now.”

*TN: This is Xue Yang’s courtesy name. The name is originally taken from the phrase ‘to help fulfil the wishes of others’, but can also be interpreted to mean ‘to become pretty’.

Hearing the name, Xue Yang’s face immediately darkened.

Is it possible that Xue Yang was given a courtesy name once he entered the Jin sect? Id doesn't seem like he likes it. It also implies his position there, to do what the Jin sect wants. hmmm.

Chapter 119: Extra—Incense Burner (Part Two)

With this, Lan WangJi’s handsome, icy features snapped instantaneously.

He began. “… For ten years? You… and I? … have been husband and wife?!”

Ahhh yes, I love this drawing of mine

The words follow the audio drama hahaha I really love how they did this part there

Lan WangJi noticed the movement, ordering in a lowered voice, “Who is it?!”

Wei WuXian let out two crisp whistles slide out from below his tongue. The sound was already a couple dozen yards away. He laughed, “It’s your husband!”

Hearing the voice, Lan WangJi’s expression changed. He couldn’t be sure, “Wei Ying?”

I suppose this is the part where Wei Ying implies that he's the "man" in the relationship, causing Lan Wangji to force him to say that HE is the one with this role. (I remember reading an explanation of a chinese native speaker about it)

He weighed in his hand the heavy thing that didn’t at all match Lan WangJi’s delicate features, praising from the bottom of his heart, “You’ve truly been talented since a young age, HanGuang-Jun.”

After he spoke, he even gave the shaft a light flick. With the such a private part of his body being played with like this, Lan WangJi already looked as if he was about to die from rage. He didn’t have the spare energy to think about whom HanGuang-Jun was either, his voice harsh, “Wei Ying!!!”

I wonder when did he become "Hanguang Jun". The first time we hear him addressed like that in Wei Wuxian's first life is when they meet at the courier station with Wei Wuxian as Laozu already, threatening to kill Wen Chao and Wen Zhuliu. After 3 months of not seeing him, Wei Wuxian immediately calls him "Hanguang Jun" instead of the familiar "Lan Zhan". And it makes you think 2 things:

1) Wei Wuxian makes them less familiar

2) Lan Wangji probably already got this title and Wei Wuxian heard about it and uses it in a way of respect but it also detaches any warmth or familiarity between them.

Wei WuXian spent so long time sucking and swallowing that even his cheeks began to hurt, yet still there was no release. He was quite puzzled as to what was going on—it was impossible he wasn’t even skilled enough to handle the seventeen-year-old Lan WangJi. He glanced up, however, only to find that Lan WangJi’s face was full of endurance. The rod was clearly already as hard as iron, yet he persisted stubbornly, refusing to release almost as if he was trying to protect some last line of defense.

Lan Wangji: MUST PROTECT VIRGINITY AT ALL COSTS!

With a few of these near brushes, Wei WuXian felt his thighs tremble weakly, almost unable to keep kneeling any longer. He immediately withdrew his fingers, taking a moment to calm down. Turning back, he caught Lan WangJi off guard with the sudden eye contact. Lan WangJi shut his eyes closed at once.

Wei WuXian smirked, “Hey, Lan Zhan, what are you doing? Reciting the Lan Sect’s sect rules in your heart?”

With the correct guess, Lan WangJi’s eyelashes flickered. He seemed like he wanted to open his eyes, yet in the end he still held it back.

LMAO LAN ZHAN YOU GEEK

Wei WuXian stared at him with a grin. He waved Bichen in his hand before he looked down, planting a soft kiss on Bichen’s hilt. Right after, he stuck out the scarlet tip of his tongue and began to lick the hilt.

sdlfkgjsldkjtotrelkdfjg OH MY FUCKING GOD

Lan WangJi could neither say ‘yes’ nor simply let him play with himself using Lan WangJi’s own sword. He didn’t know how to answer the question. Wei WuXian kneeled on the ground with his back straight as he crawled towards him on his knees, coaxing, “If you just say ‘yes’, I’ll give you back your sword and do fun things with you. Yes or no?”

A while later, a word squeezed through Lan WangJi’s clenched teeth, “… No!”

Wei WuXian raised his brows, “Hm. Mark your word.” He backed off from Lan WangJi’s body and sat down before him, grinning as he parted his legs, “Then you can watch me play with Bichen.”

In this part, it isn't clear from the translation that Wei Wuxian straddled Lan Wangji's body. I thought he simply got close to him, standing on his knees in front of him. 7seas makes it more clear:

Lan Wangji could neither say "okay". Nor could he allow Wei Wuxian to profane his sword. He was stumped, unable to answer. Wei Wuxian knelt in front of him, his back as straight as a brush, then shuffled over on his knees and straddled him.

"Give me the okay and I'll return your sword," he coaxed. "Then you and I can do fun things together. Okay?"

It took Lan Wangji some time before a word escaped through his gritted teeth. "...No!"

Wei Wuxian quirked an eyebrow. "M'kay. You said it."

He backed down from his position atop Lan Wangji and sat in front of him. Snickering, he opened his legs.

It's much more clear what Wei Wuxian did here.

From Lan WangJi’s perspective, it was truly a scene so impossibly obscene. Wei WuXian lay in front of Lan WangJi, opening his legs out of his own will as he held Lan WangJi’s sword Bichen down below. The hilt was hard and cold, making the soft entrance swollen in an almost pitiful way. Even so, Wei WuXian still tried hard as he pushed and pulled it inside his body, his motions quickening as the thrusts became easier and easier. He breathed lightly as he gazed at Lan WangJi with glazed eyes, calling, “Lan Zhan…”

“Lan Zhan…” The calls were tinged with a slightly nasal tone. It seemed like he was begging him, or perhaps like unconscious murmurs that came from the pleasure. Either way, it was enough to muddle one’s mind. Lan WangJi seemed as if he couldn’t even shut his eyes again or even avert his gaze, staring with fervor at his face, at how he struggled under Bichen, at how he shuddered as he touched himself. Lan WangJi’s knuckles cracked.

Oh my fucking god. Lan Wangji, I feel you so much. Go to him. DESTROY HIM.

Just as he wanted to rest for a bit, his knees were suddenly seized by a pair of iron-like hands, and his legs were forced open.

Wei WuXian opened his eyes, only to crash into Lan WangJi’s almost frighteningly red ones, ignited by a strange flame. He grabbed Bichen, pulled it out, and tossed it far away. The moment the hilt left his body, Wei WuXian let out a moan, as if he was dissatisfied.

Lan WangJi raged, “Shameless!!!”

TEACH HIM A LESSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lan WangJi’s harsh yet low voice sounded beside his ear, “Who is the husband?”

At first, Wei WuXian was still dazed and unable to react. Lan WangJi asked again, with a plunge so deep he almost perished from pleasure. He hurried, “You! You! You are, you’re the husband…”

It was all karma for him.

Ah yes, this part is what I mentioned above.

As he shifted up and down from Lan WangJi’s steady rhythm, he clung to Lan WangJi’s arms and begged, “… Er-Gege… Lan Zhan… Go a bit gentler, won’t you? It hurts… I think I’m bleeding…”

It was indeed quite moist where the two were connected, and the wet squelches also grew louder in volume. Hearing this, Lan WangJi immediately looked down, and was at once frozen.

Wei WuXian whined, “Is it bleeding?”

Lan WangJi let out a heavy breath, “No?”

Wei WuXian, “No? Then what is it?”

Lan WangJi’s deep voice sounded, “You are wet.”

No matter for how long, the insides of Wei WuXian’s thighs had already become covered in some sort of fluid, while on Lan WangJi’s dark erection was the same moist reflection. It could only be from within Wei WuXian’s body.

WEI YINGGGGGGGGSKDLJGKSDJGKJREDGKJX STAHP.

He hurried, “… Lan Zhan, Lan Zhan, let me get up, let me be on top, alright?”

Lan WangJi seemed as though he didn’t understand what Wei WuXian meant by ‘on top’, hesitating slightly. Wei WuXian hugged him and struggled hard to flip the two, switching their positions.

At the moment, Lan WangJi lay flat on the ground while Wei WuXian sat on top of him, the two of them connected hips to buttocks.

Lan Zhan don't worry, you are the husband, you are topping, you are the penetrating one, you are the raping one. Luckily for you Wei Wuxian likes it that way too.

Lan WangJi flipped his whole person over, locked his wrists behind his back, and landed another heavy hit on the snowy flesh.

Alongside the crisp sound, Wei WuXian’s entire body trembled. He wailed, “It hurts!”

I like 7seas version more:

Pa! Wei Wuxian's whole body jerked from the strike, and he cried pitifully. "Ow!"

It just fits a sex scene more XDDD

In the embrace, Wei WuXian was kissed for a long while. Satisfied, he shut his eyes, “Lan Zhan… Let me ask you a question. By coming inside of me every time, is it that you want me to bear a little Young Master Lan for you?”

In the dream he teased Lan WangJi and ended up digging his own grave, so when he woke up and saw Lan WangJi again, he couldn’t help but to spout out nonsense again. But Lan WangJi wasn’t as easily flustered as before either. He only asked, “How could you?”

If you could Wei Wuxian, Lan Wangji would show you no mercy.

Wei WuXian propped up one leg, grinning, “Embarrassed again? I…” Before he even finished, he suddenly felt Lan WangJi lay a light pat on his buttocks. Wei WuXian almost fell off the bed, “What are you doing?!!”

Lan WangJi, “Let me see.”

Wei WuXian crawled up at once, ignoring his shaky legs, “No thanks, Lan Zhan, I certainly remember what wonderful things you did in your dream. Nobody had ever treated me like this!!! In the future you’re not allowed to this either. Really, if you wanna fuck me then do it, I’ll open my legs and let you do whatever you want—just don’t hit me!!”

Lan WangJi pulled him back onto the bed, “I will not.”

Having acquired his promise, Wei WuXian was relieved, “HanGuang-Jun, mark your words.”

Lan WangJi, “Mn.”

With three nights of toil, he felt the fatigue slowly rise. Wei WuXian couldn’t keep going either. He snuggled into Lan WangJi’s arms again and mumbled, “Nobody had ever treated me like this…”

Lan WangJi stroked his hair and landed a kiss on his forehead. Shaking his head, he smiled.

Ok, this makes me soooo curious to know why Wei Wuxian's reaction is so serious on this. The way he repeats that"nobody else ever treated him this way". Nobody has ever fucked him before too, but this is more than just a sex act, isn't it? For him it's an act of humiliation in punishment, and although he has no problem of being punished (both in sex and outside of it) and although he doesn't mind being a bit humiliated in sex, apparently spanking is the limit. Really interesting hahahha

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