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Second iteration of the trailer. 

I believe the overall structure is a lot better now with a clear segment structure for Roya - Mental World - Earth and the progression of the appearance corruption.

For the beginning, I was unsure with the 3D and its potential to be misleading so we have different intro here. The NSFW also got adjusted to a level where the level of expliciteness is a bit too much for Patreon but if I post it as public I should be able to upload it to Youtube if I declare it as Mature.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/12R2uJ5zXoG7Vyi66VqXuDdKJ9yqCN594/view?usp=sharing 

Comments

Ryknight5

Some of the text slides go by really fast. Even as someone that can read really quickly, it's tough to read all of the text on a couple slides before it cuts away.

aa

it's much improved, in my opinion it would be enough to put 2-3 main characters and not really all but also maybe a fight against a demon general... one who sees all these characters at the beginning only makes him confused...