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Young Merchant Dinner 3 (Text) (Patreon)

Published:
2022-04-12 13:11:01
Edited:
2022-04-12 13:11:27
Imported:
2022-08

Content

A new scene written by our assisstant writer. Prepare yourself for extremely degenerate arm-in-arm walking (Also Groping)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MzkvtIqw0rLPR6rEpOLPbVYB_IoIeyqH8_s2LehEjt0/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Anonymous

Aura is so cute lmao

OhioOkie

I like this a lot. May I suggest there is more physical action describe. An example of what I mean is below. "(YM approaches aura from behind and gropes her) A: Ahhhhhhh~! YM: When you've got tits like this that are all yours, who WOULDN'T want to show off their goods?" Changed to " (YM approaches aura from behind and gropes her) A: Ahhhhhhh~!. Pressing her tits into YM's hand. YM: Pulls A's nipples out and twist. When you've got tits like this that are all yours, who WOULDN'T want to show off their goods?" Adding these short descriptions of what the characters actually do instead of generic statements, I think gives a fuller picture of the scene.

Reddy Bread

Nice! Idk who came up with the idea of more of the young merchant but this scene is genius! Haha! You continue to impress me Auradev not only with the game as a whole but the characters and story as a whole. I like the young merchant lol smug little bastard he is. I hope he gets to bang her eventually like he wants

iTyG Acorn

was really nice to read, cant wait for the scene :) big thanks to our assistant writer and your work :)

Gifted-Monster

My god, not walking arm in arm! No! That's too lewd!!!

OhioOkie
>>81766490

Well walking arm in arm is nice but if A actually would press her breasts to his arm would solidify the appearance of the relationship.