Disintegrity 98 remade ! (Patreon)
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I included page 99 cos I touched it up as well but the changes are not so significant that I'll mention them. You can still read the old post and it'll still detail it all fine enough ( https://www.patreon.com/posts/disintegrity-24225534 )
Now, 98 is not a page where there's much to say either. Cos it's about as straightforward an upgrade as it gets. I didn't fancy it up, reshape the page, it's just the same but prettier. The big problem of the old page was how thick the linework was. Basically, it's just hard to understand what is even being drawn, so that added to the silly faces is overkill levels of whatever the fuck is going on.
The only other change that's worth mentioning is the last panel having its outline removed. Now it's not contained within a neat typical rectangle at the bottom which I thought was just a little too cleanin the old version. I thought Larsen and his text in that panel should stick out a little more than they did cos it's the one part of the page that sets up the new few coming up, it's the one that has a pay off whereas the first panels are mostly just flavoring, they're there for pacing.