Disintegrity 80 HD (Patreon)
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The before after : https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1rqvbs0AhHkXSvBJQgKu35UspVeCur6CM?usp=sharing
Just after : https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1axdXteUc7pbZZD6PljuDC7JINqTEkRoV?usp=sharing
This is one chunky lineworked page... One I should rework into having thinner lines to have it more consistent with the rest of the comic. Zee's not floofed enough either. But it is in fact one of the earliest redone page. Probably the second or third one. I have also reworked it once since I first posted it ! But not enough it seems. I considered doing it right now but fuck it. This is how it'll look.
Speaking of, I've never actually mentioned what went into the changes between this page and the old 80 since, well, it was so early I wasn't doing that yet but there's not much to tell...
I remembered being happy with that page in 2016, thinking it looked good, and then I noticed that Larsen's face was slanted and nasty looking. It's one of the page I've redone earliest because it's one that I remembered bothering me most. It's also the first one that made me realize that I'd bitten into way more than I thought. Especially that first panel, which I htought still looked okay and yet I painted over a lot of it because even if it was okay-ish, it wasn't okay-ish enough. I couldn't just slap a better looking head on the same bodies and call it a day, which is what I thought I'd do at first.
So yeah. This was made in december 2018. Fuck.