Disintegrity 20 + 96 remade ! (Patreon)
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Page 20 was one I never had a real problem with. It's fine. The only panel that really needed an overhaul was the first one, where to make it dramatic as can be I thought "I'll just hide his face with darkness !" but it comes across as an unnatural big splotch of black rather than a result of the lighting of the scene.
Otherwise there's nothing special to the changes. I guess I darkened the face in the last panel is as drastic as it gets. I think it looks better, I'm not sure if that panel still implies the acceleration of the action effectively but fakkit.
96 was a quick one, which I don't think will come as a surprise since there's only one real panel. But that pose was completely redrawn anyway ! I got nothing special to say again, except that it seems I had forgotten to draw Zee's tail in the old page. Okay ! Gonne go to sleep now...