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God we're still nowhere near done with this remake, that's kind of depressing when I thought it'd be much quicker and I haven't done any of the other comics I've been working on forever...


Anyway ! This page didn't change much from the old to new beside that it looks less crap, there's only one change that I'd consider worth talking about : I removed the Hey Arnold reference. For those who don't know, Helga Pataki is a character in a 90's animated series called Hey Arnold, she was in love with the protagonist (and had a secret love shrine that included a bust made out of chewing gum) but she would bully him instead of coming out with her feelings.

So it's fitting enough ! Why remove it ? Cos it's not relevant. For one, Hey Arnold is pretty old by now, to the point where i feel like i have to explain who Helga Pataki is. For two, I feel like it's just a bit too overt of a reference. Having The scythe  from Soul Eater on the wall ? That's discreet enough. Direct mention by one of the character to some cartoon ? Heeeh. It would have to fit the character. I guess Hey Arnold would suit Zee fine, he looks grunge enough to like 90's shit, but eh. I feel it's better when it's not there.


So yeah. It's gone.

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gurlow

I am sensing some impending gay....

Eldkatten

Great work! E.g. Zee's pose in the middle panel looks more natural and is a better image of his inner struggle. And again there is another detail for me, which I didn't see in the older version: Zee's and Larsen's opposing profiles in the upper right. I only saw Zee earlier. Thank you!

Plush_Kat

I really like what you've done with the page. The reference from hey Arnold really helped me understand the situation a lot better when I had my first go at reading this story. It's sad to see it go.

RodVonBoche

Yeh, Zee looked awkward cos his arms were too short, his shoulder too low and the folds of his top were incomprehensible. I forgot to mention one change I thought was important in that panel too, it's being able to see Larsen's face and expression when he speaks, it helps make it feel more natural

RodVonBoche

I know, I liked it too and some others mentioned finding it funny as well but I can only imagine it's a bit awkward for anyone who doesn't get the reference, even if the context explains it a little