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Also, after looking through Chapter 61, I've gone and updated things a bit. the plot hasn't changed at all, but I've given the person who escorts Xiulan to the sect a name, Bolin, and made elder Yi less outwardly aggressive. They're small changes, but I find it improves the chapter. Gou Ren's part hasn't changed.

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Anonymous

The changes were subtle, but I like what you’ve done. Thanks!

Len

Bolin...from Avatar the legend of korra

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I think it's great though I woild make a small switch and change "So, what did this hidden master..." to "And... What did this hidden master..." in order to increase the implication.