Bonus Scene #1: A Life-Changing Ceremony (Patreon)

First, I just want to point out that V0.6.6 is out for the 10$ tier. Please check it out if haven't already. 

So this is the first bonus scene for A Promise Best Left Unkept. For those that are new or unfamiliar with the context behind the bonus scene, it was an idea that I came up with in order to celebrate the first year of development of A Promise Best Left Unkept. The goal was to generate ideas from the community, take the five most popular ones and vote for the one that would become the first bonus scene.

Here's the idea that ultimately won:

Who: Laura, Laura's Mom, and Luca

Where: On Laura's and Harry's bed (or somewhere at the reception).

How: Threesome, ideally ending Laura's mom eating a creampie out of Laura. Maybe even vice versa.

When: During the wedding. Laura's mom goes to check on Laura and finds her fucking Luca and joins.

Outfit: Laura in her wedding gown. Laura's mom in whatever she wore to the wedding.

Position: It can be anything tbh. Other than the creampie eating, I didn't imagine much. Just general positions involving fmf threesomes are fine. Hell, even the full nelson thing seems hot, ending with a vaginal creampie. Even hotter with Laura and Laura's mom cum swapping.

Why: Laura invites her mom to the wedding once she starts to empathize with her mother.

The length was supposed to be between 1k to 3k words, but I ended up writing 4k+ words unintentionally. It has always been a bit hard for me to write short stories/scenes. I'm also not used to writing things that don’t come from me, so I hope I did an okay job for my first time. Please give me your thoughts on it. The reception will determine whether I create a new tier to generate ideas for bonus scenes, or if it becomes a very rare occurrence. It's obviously a lot of work… not to mention the cost. But I did have fun. And it is manageable (mostly).

One thing I wanna point out, I didn't re-read myself. I also didn't do a quality check on the programming. I need to cut corners somewhere. Which is kinda hard for me since I end up with very mixed feelings. I'm not entirely satisfied with my work. Also, it's a bit of a shame since I would have personally preferred if Sandra was introduced in the official game before being used in a bonus scenario like this. Which is why I need to point out something that is really important:

Please do keep in mind that the characters' personalities might differ a bit from how they would normally act.

In order to match the prompt, or to make it more exciting, I need to expedite the corruption process and things of that nature. I still try my best to keep their overall personality intact, but yeah… can't do miracles either.

Sad fact: I don't have a voice actress for Sandra, so no beautiful singing from her, unfortunately.

Fun fact: For the second scene, my artists made an error and the expressions I needed for Sandra and Laura were inverted. So Sandra has Laura's expression, and vice-versa. And I didn't really want to waste his time fixing it. So Sandra is a bit less expressive than I would have liked.