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On Wings of Steel - Chapter 18 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-09-13 19:45:11
Imported:
2021-03

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Damn, I was hoping to have this chapter done last Sunday but I spent the better part of this week tweaking it back and forth. I'm still not happy how it turns out. The flow is awkward and I don't think I managed to deliver the tension I was going for.

Anyway, I either put it out or keep it to myself forever so here goes nothing.

I hope you like it better than I do

Comments

Obsessivehobbyist

I thought the chapter was great! We are really starting to see just what it means to have Shirou participating in the Sekirei Plan. Can expect many tears to follow.

V01D

Could you save these to someplace like Dropbox, rather than Mega - so they are more accessible?

Anonymous

Was there a reason you ended that where you did? It wasn’t a cliffhanger, it just stopped in a strange place. Also was very short...

Anonymous

I see what you mean by flow being awkward. The end of the chapter didn't actually feel like the end to a chapter and instead felt like a random cut off point.

neoalfa
>>44121461

Yeah, I know. I could have kept going but the fight and the immediate aftermath are going to be at least one chapter's worth of content and if I wrote it it would have taken me another week at best to go anywhere. I preferred to cut it off right there so that I can work better on the second part.

Sarnon
>>44121461

Any chance you can put the next poll up quickly? I kind of want the next chapter and I get the feeling that more people will vote for this with a cliffhanger fresh in mind. #PollManipulationIsFun

DraconianGreed

Um, is there like a set schedule for polls and do all patrons get to vote or only the higher payers?

neoalfa
>>45041275

Hi. There is no set schedule. I put one up a poll after I publish the chapters from the previous poll. Every Patron can vote, but the value of each vote is determined by your tier. As a $5 Patron, your vote counts five points.