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And here is Chapter 31

I'm not going to lie, despite rewriting this chapter at least four times, I'm still not happy with it. I mean, the things that were meant to happen happened, but they feel soulless. Maybe it's just me?

You let me know in the comments.

PS: In a few hours I'm going to put up the poll for the new update

Comments

Parker Maisterra

An alright chapter- honestly a part of me feels like it and chapter 30 should have been fused for one big chapter

Angryhenry

I gotta reread the entire thing before reading this new one!

GameCrusher55

I think your right I don’t think this story is going the way you want it too. I think you need to edit this arc itself. The cold blooded action you cause to occur here establish a drift between Shirou and the Hinata-so residents. Your going to have to rewrite some entire chapters