On Wings of Steel - Chapter 04 & 05 (Patreon)

At last! It's wasn't easy writing these two chapters but I'm finally done.

You might notice by reading them that I'm starting to take the setting away both from canon and from fanon. I'm trying to rewrite the Sekirei-verse not just to fit it into the Nasuverse, but as its standalone story.

Let's face it. Sekirei's plot wasn't that great and the characters were cardboard-cut, barely above archetypes. I'm trying to avoid that here, but that's basically making characters from scratch.

Not a walk in the park.

In any event, here goes nothing. 

Chapter 04 

Chapter 05 -EDIT: Right version is up (Karasuba description added)

Let me know what you think in the comments.