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Path of the King - Chapter 41 (Patreon)

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2017-11-25 15:14:34
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And right after that, Chapter 41 is here for your entertainment. 


Don't forget to review, eh?

Comments

2Lazy2Name

Wow, two in a row! You are awesome, Neoalfa. Though I have to ask, when are you going to start polling your patrons on which story they want updated next? You did say that voting would begin in November, and we're getting close to the end of that.

Shinjai

Firstly, great chapter. I enjoyed the peek inside Rider's thoughts, which lines up partly with my personal headcanon for Rider's behaviour at this point in the HGW. I also liked Rin's thoughts on Medea and Shirou's relationship and how she feels confused by her own feelings regarding it. Secondly, damn you! Cliffhanger again! Take all of my salt and impatience! One mistake I did spot, on the first page "inconspicuous black back", should be bag I believe.

WardenMyst

I have a love/hate relationship with this chapter. Firstly, the thoughts with rider were very much in line with my own. Secondly, once again, you write some amazing chapters. Now, the only thing that is gonna drive me up a wall on this chapter is the cliff hanger at the end. I screeched when I reached the end. All in All, an amazing pair of chapters.

Gergely Boza

Congrats, you managed the seemingly-impossible feat of making Shinji even more of a detestable, smug little bastard who is in desperate need of a beatdown of epic proportions. Overall, usual good chapter, might want to check a minor typo on page 10 ("Ilt" vs "it") as well as a seemingly improperly-rendered break a few lines below that.

Anonymous

Well, now we get down to the early start to the grail war. I'm not surprised that Shinji was at least aware of Shirou's status as a master at this stage, since he was patrolling with Saber. I also like the exploration of the characters here. The way you explore them without resorting to narrative filigree is one of the best aspects of your writing.

Jeff

Great story hopping it’s one where Shirou beats Shinji

Jeff
>>8533619

Beats the fear of god into Shinji. Didn’t finish the last post also when can we expect another chapter if you have a plan.

FateBurn

good chapter, and Shinji continue to show the kind of scumbag he is, hope he beats him bloody and the gives him to Medea so she can refine her technique for Jason on his modern times equivalent