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Maid Lucario 2 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-02-15 05:00:55
Edited:
2021-08-01 05:30:07
Imported:
2021-09

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Second page... I rush a little bit the painting, so probably I'm gonna make a fixed version when the comic is finished. Anyways, hope you like it and feel free to leave any critic, as I said before, this is my first comic ever :P

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Anonymous

Por antojar. XD

Pltnm06Ghost

For your first comic ever, both of the first two pages has been pretty well done. Not to mention Maid Lucario's seriously cute! There's nothing wrong that I can personally point out. But if you need some guidance on arranging panels, Super Eyepatch Wolf did a deep analysis of Akira Toriyama's manga and point out why what he does works well. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zFFru4q_4H8 For those really intense scenes of action (or sexy scenes in this case), you might want to give this video a gander. You may be able to apply the logic behind panel arrangement to your own comic! Looking forward to how this comic pans out, and good luck getting to the finish line : D