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Alright guys.

I am actually at a crossroads here, because I am trying to work the comic in the right direction but I think I for once could use your input.

Who knows, if it works out well enough then I think I will be more open for more decisions of yours in the future.

See at the current state of chapter 5 we are with Ron and Susan.

Should we stay with them for one more page or go back upstairs to see Kim, Shego and Adrena talk about more suspects?

I am a little conflicted, because both appeal to me.

So I thought I would ask for you opinion.

Thank you for your help.

Yours truly
Hammer

Comments

Jaguar Man

Up to you, too many beauties to choose, good luck good luck hahaha

Jebest4781

I'd say spread things out. Showing what else is occurring while stuff in the Stoppable household is going on.

I. Nobes

I mean. More tonnie is always a blessing

Osbourne GG

It's too hard to choose hahah on one hand it's great reading about Kim and the girls looking at the yearbook but Susan is also pretty amazing and then there's the possibility of seeing what other established characters are up to or even something different like a bystander walking past the house and hearing the screams of Susan hahaha either way whatsoever you decide will be brilliant

annonfan224

Plot wise probably stick wow Ron and Susan. But personally I would like to go back to Kim

Anonymous

Personally, I feel like the story should progress. The new women are great, but a comic is more than hot pictures. It seems like the girls upstairs are discussing something that moves the characters forward, so that's what I find the most interesting.

Meshach Berry

Can’t get enough of Susan and that ass.

Teh Wen Khiey

Where we last left, Kim, Adrena, & Shego we discussing suspects who took Ron's virginity. I'd say we can switch back to Ron & Susan.

Jaguar Man

Criticism sucks so don't read if don't want any. Also it's porn comic, it's not a big deal; your art evolves and honestly no one cares but me. It might even be good in the long run, as bigger anything is often liked. Realism does not matter either. But as Shego has been a mainstay and one of the biggest reasons I like your art I really felt like talking about it. Please don't take it personal or lose motivation. But I'd appreciate your time. I have taken time to try and frame the criticism in a constructive manner, showing positives and my own biases. Note that I am not against change. Bonnie's breasts have gotten bigger and it's been a good thing. Shego's breasts have gotten bigger back in 2021 and it's been a REALLY good thing. As I said before it hit a perfect sweet spot. Kim right now looks better than she ever has before, as does Britina and Adrena Lynn. Missy and Monique look better with bigger breasts. Tessa's breasts are huge and they are perfectly proportionate and natural. Flora's and Tonnie's breasts which are larger than Shego's always look natural. I am kind of sad that Shego's design around the chest area has become really big. Sometimes (not always) I feel it can look unnatural or disproportionate, when before that didn't happen as often. Your art style is very beautiful and memorable because to me it feels realistic. Girls are drawn in a way that looks similar to women in real life in terms of their frame, which is why I wanted to bring this up. However, this change can be good. You are getting much more practice with huge breasts, so eventually Shego's going to look better. And again, I stress that this is my take only, 99% of people will not be bothered by bigger breasts, it's silly I'm even talking about this. And her new design is a done deal, Chapter 4 has been a project that has been difficult, and you're doing your best to give the fans what they want as quick as possible. Nonetheless I hope you can find a middle ground between really huge and big if you intend to stick to what you're doing. Shego's breasts to me were at a perfect sweet spot, around the same as Queen La and Hydrea. March 21 2022 seems to be the last time Shego was drawn in the old style. If you look at Chapter 3, Shego's breasts looked different, still large, but (to me) the perfect size for her character. Again I stress Shego with bigger breasts than before can be really good. My favorite pictures of Shego is your June 2nd 2022 picture of her with her family, and August 13 2021. I appreciate you reading if you got to the end. It probably won't influence you to do anything different and that's completely fine, but for me it was worth a shot.