Bully from Hell Finale (Early Access) (Patreon)

Okay it's unfinished, but I'm just under 6000 words. I've made sure to enable commenting, so please leave any thoughts or ideas for things you'd want me to add, change, or remove. I'm aware of how much "telling" I'm doing rather than "showing" but I intend to go back and re-write those sections.

This one is turning into much more than I thought it would, but I guess that's a good thing? Anyway, leave comments, I could use the input.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BrB4fjreSUVni20uJsjxJMf7gyRGkQhsjRFYEl2uF6E/edit?usp=sharing