How I edit (short story) (Patreon)

Unsure what to write, I decided to write up a quick and easy VWD story. However, instead of it just being a quickie, I thought I'd highlight my process and how I edit my work. Not really sure why you guys would care about such things, but I'm doin' it anyway!

Either way, there's a story in there somewhere, hope you enjoy it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EV_eaY0Pfck9TD6bnsUPCkUA3DwsfNG9IsoZE5PSfaU/edit?usp=sharing