Julia's Descent update (Patreon)

Added about 2000 more words to the document this morning. I'm now at 5k, so I need my proofreading pals to give me feedback.

I could clean it up from where it is and let that be the whole chapter, or I can keep going with it. Let me know what you think. Might be blue-balling the other readers though, to wait so long and only to have another cliffhanger. lol

Oh and here the link again:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CE9bbHtjWwFNkdcR-_gr_FZ5rzYifq71TZJn-fjjFec/edit?usp=sharing