Ruby's Workout Page 6 (Patreon)

page 6 is done! As promised i tried to be a little more conscious about the text placement on this one to create more flow. the only dissapointment was the bottom left page text placement since i wanted to close up the negative space and switching who was saying what made it look odd to me so i left it as it is. I was so paranoid about the placement, i was convinced that i forgot how to count at the bottom right side panels and got so nervous x) onto "new" things that i've tried doing here was providing more atmospheric/ambient colors to set a certain tone or mood but as well as providing just a general obvious demand of more color into the project since the entirety of it was kind of lacking in that. now of course the colors arent exactly "in your face" or really a ton to be extremely significant but it's a learning process here.

i think my biggest mistake was definitely having an absent background which could very well amplify the position, color, and sensation of the comic. However due to time constraints and demands from just comics in general, i feel it would consume too much time from other things (which is very apparent) so i tried to minimalize it this project as much as possible but provide emphasis to what is indeed on screen. i guess ill save that for the next comic project in the future which will most likely be an on and off thing compared to this one. anywho, hope you like how it turned out and ill be working on page 7! Also i did recently notice that the white stripe on her shoes is absent from page 4 so sometime next month is when ill add it to the monthly pack c: