The Great Rewritening Feedback Request: Chapters 6 & 7 (Patreon)

I've been struggling with rewriting the intro of Chapter 5, but on the flip side that means I've procrastinated by instead finishing another of Mind Blind's endings! Still can't be played since the entire middle of the game needs to be recoded, but hey it's written. Turns out being in a rut isn't all that bad if it means that I write to avoid editing.

Still, I figure it's best to collect feedback for the next two chapters so that when I finally finish with Hope's new Chapter 5 introduction, I can be off to the races with the next two chapters. 

I'm toying with the idea of combining Chapters 6 & 7, as honestly not a lot happens in Chapter 7 (a lot of things can be pruned). But then again, I'm pretty attached to Kenzie's cliffhanger entrance between chapters, and I don't know if I could bear taking out Rosy's stairwell scenes. 

Basically, I'm indecisive and could use your suggestions.

There are 3 ways to provide feedback:

1) Leave a comment on this post,

2) Use the Great Rewritening Feedback channel via the Sanctum of Spoilers,

or

3) Send an email to mindblindbetatest@gmail.com.