Mermaid Bay test page (very mild nsfw) (Patreon)

Mornin from here,

Got an update on the comic I mentioned previously!

I've been putting together the first page and wanted to nail down the style going forward. I've been messing with this for about two days because of how picky I am with things like font and colour. The font and text in general I am still unsure of lol

The two main things I want to achieve is clarity and a loose fun visually style that is enjoyable to work with, this first page is maybe slightly more clean and uptight in presentation as we see this salesman beginning the scene.

Let me know what you guys think and if it makes sense what is going on, hopefully I can get the ball rolling with this and make a fun pirate story for all to enjoy.

Also I don't know if it is particularly nsfw, it is just one side nip but thought I should mention

Cheers goys