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Trust in a good shredder

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James Kaplan

In some defense of Allie, I'm lucky enough to have an omniscient audience perspective and I still feel like I have only a limited grasp of what's going on with our deuteragonist's life.

Straw

I missed when Amanda noticed Allie checking on the mail, unless she didn't use the teapot method of loosening the glue.

edwinflores428

Poor gal, her world has been turned upside down

tigerthighs

It happened off page. Susan knew what was going on and spilled the beans on Allie. It would have taken a whole chapter of them talking to do that and I want to cut to the chase. I have plans.

tigerthighs

And NO! Amanda is not a third stage navigator. I regret the Dune references now.

tigerthighs

Did anyone notice Amanda’s freckles disappeared? I’ll fix that later.