Changes! (Patreon)

Most of the changes I'm making are pretty subtle, though I added a bit to the scene when Ava asks Amythyst why she picked Ava, rather than hiring someone, or picking someone else.

The biggest change is going to revolve around the idea that most people at Landon House believe Amy is a random woman their 'eccentric' employer took on and altered to look like his daughter after the real Amy died. Amy won't be called 'Ms. Landon' or be directly acknowledged as Carl's daughter.

I'm going to shift a big part of Ava's interactions with Veronica to the break after her first week-long stint in VR at Landon House, before Amy starts to wake up. Veronica is going to clue Ava in, and Ava and Amythyst will have to wonder if the rumor could be true, and the real Amy is dead, leaving yet another Amy-doppelganger in her place, this one created by Carl. That idea will obviously be dispelled when Amy recovers enough to talk, but it will add another layer of uncertainty to that part of the story.