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Hello people, to those of you who have read A Night with Loona comic complete. I would like to know your general and specific opinion so I don't make the same mistakes in the next comic.   It could be some dialogue that could have been better, or page, or complete sequence.   Be honest and respectful, I'll be reading :D Thanks.

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Anonymous

Superb comic really love the L+M ship however while I know I will be in the extreme minority for this. I would like for moxxie to show some guilt over cheating on his wife. Maybe next comic he decides to get extra loving with her. Overall probably the best comic so far in this fandom.

Anonymous

Personally, I really enjoyed pretty much everything going on here, but if I had to make a pick, though I could be off from the majority here I'd love to see Millie looped in in some way. The premise is that she can't take Moxxie, but I feel like it might be exciting to see her actually try.

aginioodwigom

I loved the comic. The only opinion I really have for the next one is more of a personal preference I guess. Where sometimes I found some of the sequences in the sex scenes a little too abridged. By that I mean to show more parts of each action.

Jeffrey G H

OK, 1st, loved Sol, and would love to see more of her. The "second go" while coffee is being made seems a bit overboard. We had 1 burst through the door we didn't need a second. The rest was great. Artwork was perfect. For the future, Millie finds outs out, ties up L and M then fucks Blitzo or Vortex, as they listen in the other room. Loona is crying about being lonely (drunk) Millie tries to cheer her up. They fuck, strap-on that is used on Mox. Mil is said that Mox cant fuck anyone, because his big dick. She recommended Loona. After it all done, she tells never fuck behind my back again.

Aiden Skilling

I don’t rlly read comics that much but I rlly liked this one, u rlly captured Loona’s and M’s personalities. it was rlly well done, the juices weren’t overkill which I like. The speech bubbles weren’t in the way of anything, and each panel had next to no writing so u can rlly focus on the good stuff😉. I would like to see in the next part is maybe a good face fudge but other then that keep going I’m liking what I’m seeing

Ethan Templeman

Maybe a public scene where they screw each other through an open window. We see her stick her head out of one whilst in the car, and we missed out on anything happening then. Most of the camera angles also have her face visible in the frame, would be cool if we could see more of the back of her head. The camera could also be positioned further away in a scene to make the audience feel they are bystanders.

Krishna Dudhee

If this happens, when you made a Milf Loona, might we see a comic of Loona turned into a Milf in your future comic?

Aaron Jackson

I've enjoyed everything that the first comic gave us, but if there's one thing I want in the next one is MULTIPLE creampies. Really dive into the whole angle of her not only being in heat but how Moxie can go more than once. Maybe Loona awakened his libido and he can REALLY give it to her.

MrWolf

maybe a pregnant Loona from the first time he came in her