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I dont know if to do a person living underwater who save caged fishes or a girl who crosses dimensions while she sleep and she things she is in a dream or something D: 

AAA IT HAS TO BE A SHORT STORY BUT I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO YEEEEEET GJFDHGDFJ

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Anonymous

girl who travels dimensions sounds like a more complicated story to pull off, especially depending on just how short you're limited to. The girl who saves caged fishys sounds like it could be cute and even heartwarming, so my vote is for that one.

Anonymous

The girl walking between dimension sounds wicked cool. It would definitely be harder than the other idea, but I totally vote for it if you’re up for a challenge

Anonymous

I'm up for the sleepy girl!

Anonymous

The underwater one sounds super sweet but you could really experiment a lot with the dimension girl one, you can get super creative with it. You could even combined the two? Have her go into a underwater dimension where the other character is and help them save fish?

carlesdalmau

aaa i'd love that!! Butbut the firs tcomic i have to do it has to be short so i dont know yet what to do ;_;

Anonymous

Perhaps have a simple one of her waking up in a different world than the one she fell asleep in? Maybe make it a little surreal and show it through her expressions that it's very different than what she's used to? Such as a awe inspiring world that really brightens up her face, you could perhaps contrast her in bland earth toned clothes while making everything else quite bright or make some aspects really pop and have her just think "I have to come back here!" (It could even be done in just a few panels) and then maybe a couple of panels of her in different worlds, showing her more ecstatic in each one then the last panel could be her in the underwater world, making eye contact with the other character (you could make a point that she doesn't seem to interact with anyone in the other panels, just objects or environments) and then leave it there, as a small cliff hanger? Anyway, sorry for the rambling idea but hope it helps or at least sparks more ideas! 🌟😊🌟