Comic exercice (Patreon)

In class I had to redo an already finished comic page in my style, while changing the composition! I did this sketch!

As you can see I tried to unify a lot of the comic strips to do a more unified drawing! in the middle of the page the character is doing different things in differents parts of the day in the same frame! I dont know if its very understanable (it's a sketch after all) but if I had to finish the drawing I will paint it in a way that you will see the day is passing (you can see the sun in different times of the day in the middle frame!)