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πŸ’¬ : I need to change it abit

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for those who are wondering about the original material,
here is the website you can check out.  >> Mashiro Castle <<
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Okashina Futari schedule to release Wednesday/Saturday

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BearyJey

"I would have very much trouble [...]" sounds weird and a bit confusing. Just my two cents. Third cent would be "Deal!" should be more like "Deal?"

coredumperror

Yeah, I'd go with "It would have been really troublesome if this happened while I was in class!" And "Deal?" for Amy's last word.

Sentinel00

She really wants it huh? :D

meowwithme

ok I will use all that, I basically copied the original text from the website

PokeFanTGTF

I've got a feeling Satori's not gonna turn Ayumi back straight away.