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coredumperror

Oh right, this chapter is right when they're first developing their powers. I was confused for a second. heh By the way, Ayumi's second line in panel 2 could really use some work. It should be "What makes you think I'd want to try THAT on?!" It's a common mistake to use quotation marks for emphasis, but they are never appropriate for that (I'd suggest bold, since the text is already all caps). And the word "try" was missing.

meowwithme

thank you for the edit! sorry for the mistake , Im workin on this project alone atm so im sure there will be another grammatical errors. :P