Cosmetic Surgery redo (Patreon)

so I sent my last page to Milda7 and she was not satisfied with it. Well to be honest, now that I looked at it, it didn't get the message accross either.

so Milda took her time to explain to me that this story was actually her real experience years ago of the ACTUAL medicine. or perfume drops, call Blue Boy (yeah, guys. it's real)
she told me how the smell of it made her feel feminine and that she was happy for a moment when she looked at the mirror.

andddd when i looked at my drawing, yeah, it didn't go that way. It needs rework and I very much think so. I will be producing new pages along with redoing the page as well so sit tight guys, I want it to be the best it can be.