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i recolored this page like 3 times. i think this is the tone that fits the mood . a huge contrast to the outside dark and blue tone.

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coredumperror

Shouldn't this be Page 5? The title page was Page 4. Also, a note about grammar: you can't end a speech bible with a comma. If you want the sentence to continue to another bubble, you use an ellipsis (...), or, even better, write it so the sentence doesn't break across multiple bubbles. In this case, I'd replace the comma at the end of bubble 1 with just a period, breaking her line into two separate sentences.