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Set Back (Patreon)

Published:
2018-01-22 20:11:05
Imported:
2020-10

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might have to redo the last 5 pages of Part 5 since people have been complaining about it being cliche. I might have to go with the original story i planned which i thought would be abit too serious. but we will see.

Comments

coredumperror

No, no. Please don’t change your story just because a minority of readers are mildly put off by it. It’s *your* story.

meowwithme

i might just keep it as it is. the story is only on chapter 5, it is not ready for the plot that I originally planned. its way too early to get serious

Anonymous

I think its fine how it is. :)

NicoH (NPSao)

I always thought that maybe Amy has her hand in it and makes those things happen like in a manga. :D I don't mind.

Alex Fellman

I know i've told you it before, but I'm happy to keep saying it! Write the story you want to write.

Anonymous

awww... don't change your story. It's yours not anyone else's story. The work reflects you not anyone else. If it's cliché make it cliché. *huggles*

brunoais
>>9637386

I usually support whatever the maker decides. I didn't read it yet, though. I don't like page cliffhangers. I only read when the chapter ends. Also, just because it is cliché, doesn't mean it is bad. Just use the tools your way, be it good or bad,, it is always a learning matter and learning source

Mostly5

Are you kidding me don't rewrite it, I think it's perfect the way it is. It's your story not anyone's else, you do what you think is best. And, I will be behind you 100%.