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Executioner's Gambit, Part 1 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-10-09 01:10:35
Imported:
2023-07

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Sorry, I haven't had much to share lately. I've been rearranging scenes for the next Tori book and then massaging them together so they fit.

Part 1 is complete in what will be a three part story. This hasn't been run by my editor yet, so it's still liable to change, but I believe we're getting closer to a final version!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_6vxCExBNJfEzT3dnWbCQlJcvjYgyjCv00a_4hamADQ/edit?usp=sharing

Thoughts?

Comments

Edolon

Is a good draft Progression and pace seems good, I stayed engaged/curious of where things are going, I think you drop some hints and foreshadowing here and there? I definitely like your idea with the reactor engineers, I’m not quite sure it hits? It’s silly funny but doesn’t quit hit ripping on the target. But good way to show how it’s being done Do hope you’re enjoying creating this!