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https://lachevitesecret.itch.io/text-adventure

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As mentioned last week, my tablet pen broke, so all I have to offer today is a short text adventure. Unfortunately I had a pretty disastrous week on top of that, so I had to scramble quite a bit to get even this done. It's missing some stuff I wanted to include (I intended for there to be three jobs to choose from but could only finish one in time), but there's a fair amount of stuff in there, as well as three different endings. I didn't really have much time to proofread either, so there may be some typos (sorry). Please let me know if you find any mistakes, or if there are any other issues. Feel free to let me know what you think as well, I'm not sure how much interest there is in this kind of stuff. I might add the remaining stuff I couldn't finish in time if people are interested.

I finally have a new pen now, though, and everything seems to be working fine, so stuff should be going back to normal.

Thank you for your support

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Palpameme

Honestly not bad! I'm more of a images type guy, but I definitely like the story. My only issue is that there seem to be no keyboard controls. Having to adjust my mouse for every choice got a bit tiresome while trying every path. Aside from that, pretty damn good for a side-project! Also, didn't find any typos! Though English is not my first language, so take that with a grain of salt.

lachevite

I noticed it could get a bit annoying to click through as well. If I update this further or use this format again I'll definitely add keyboard controls, or an easier way to click through things quickly

Laphometsu

I've been waiting for a text game from you since snack story! I personally enjoy your way of writing, so this was an enjoyable playthrough for me. I will concur with the person above regarding a keyboard option in the future due to how much cursor moving is required when going down a path. Otherwise, this was quite the banger and I hope you continue this project! (Do hope there's some futa content and some gassier gals in the future...)