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Poll - How burps are written

  • Onomatopoeia Burps 21
  • Descriptive Burps 3
  • 2021-12-26
  • 24 votes
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Part of the appeal to kink fics is using words to create imaginative vividness for the reader.  The words paint a very clear picture of a scene taking place and that scene is appealing to someone's fetishes.  And when it comes to burping, a lot of the times, people like the bluntness of seeing a fierce eructation spelled out.  But more and more, I've been veering away from that in my writing to keep the emphasis solely on descriptions.

So, I wanted to run a roll and see what you guys think.  Do you prefer the visual of onomatopoeia?  Or do you prefer just having the actions described vividly?

Examples:

Onomatopoeia - ""BWWUUUUHHHOOOOOOUUURRRAAAAAAPH!!!!!  Guhhh...ohhh man, I'm STUFFED...!"  Kirishima exclaimed, slapping his bloated belly heartily after giving a large belch."

Descriptive - "Kirishima punctuated the completion of his meal by letting out a crude, throaty belch that rumbled out for over three seconds.  Sighing with relief, Kirishima slapped his belly heartily and said, "Guhhh...ohhh man, I'm STUFFED...!"

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