Character Page rewrite (Patreon)

In case anyone is interested, I redid the dialogue from Kiva for his Character Page.

The point of doing the page this way was always to let the characters showcase their personalities, and the original upload was more of a massive exposition dump, rather than an interesting window into Kiva's mind, like it was SUPPOSED to be.

This is probably technically the fourth rewrite... I've gone back and forth a number of times because I was worried that letting Kiva's personality shine too much would be off-putting or toxic... because he's kinda prickly at times.

Anyway, if you want to go give it a read, or if you've read it already, I'd love to hear what you think!  https://www.godslayerscomic.com/characters