Maw play [edited/fixes] (Patreon)

high res, and now with better anatomy. It was bothering me last night, and I couldn't handle it, so i painted over the original and made some tweaks. I'm a bit happier with it now, though still not perfect.

story:

 
Alaric looked down at his lover, her soft grey fur bouncing golden light  off in every direction, a warm bronze hue tinting her body as she lay  in the soft golden grass. She gave him a firm stare at first, but when  he knelt over her and caressed her cheek, she softened her gaze, and her  expression. "My beautiful drake," he whispered down at her, and she  felt a burning sensation spread under her fur. Ezrael made a small scowl  and opened her mouth to give her usual "No" response but Alaric took  advantage of that moment, slipping a digit in her warm, wet maw. The  feeling of his mates tongue ridges on his sensitive finger-pads gave him  a chill and he felt himself twitch slightly in his sheath.  "So warm,"  he muttered, leaning over her, almost pinning her to the grass to kiss  her, using his fingers to open her maw to him more, playing with her  tongue while they kissed, breaking it to sit up and take a breath. It  had been months since either of them had felt real gravity and plants  underfoot, and the sensation of being under a warm star made both of  them feel energized and alive.
 

As he played with her tongue, she relaxed slightly into his touches, the  usual stiffness she displayed, fading slowly. Ezrael wasn't fond of how  he stared at her face as she licked his hand, the embarrassment of such a  thing in public getting her attention but he took notice and pressed  his thumb deeper into the back of her mouth, sliding it along her tongue  and over the acid duct at the back of it. She'd begun salivating from  his touch, and he knew she would be getting slick in other areas as  well. The temptation to take his mate, right here, in the open was  overwhelming...And when she gazed up at him with such a hungry desire,  how could he resist....