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Ugh, I know it's been forever.  Just… for the longest time, nothing I wrote for the middle of this chapter worked for me.  I think I've got it now, but please let me know if it still seem off.

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Copy of Sharing the Night: Ch. 16

Sharing the Night: Chapter 16 ✶ ✶ ✶ The atmosphere on the train ride to Canterlot was an oppressive silence leaden with words unsaid. That is, at least, until Rainbow Dash went and said them. "You think it was something we did?" she asked no one in particular.

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Nilaru

Looking good to me! i like the bit of introspection from Celestia regarding her perceived lack of influence over the progress of her nation.