Wookiee Sex 6, Page 1 (Patreon)

So, I sent my script to Ferawyn yesterday, along with the first page.

Of course, he pointed out to many problems with it, destroying my ego and making very good points at the same time :P and I'll have to rethink some of it, but I'm keeping most of it intact. Tomorrow I'll do a final, rewrite and see where the layout will be affected.

Meanwhile, Here's page 1, as well as what I'll use as a promoting tool on HF

Hope you guys dig it!
Alx