Critic's Corner! (Patreon)

Our fellow photographer, Amir, sent his last photo for Critic's Corner. And look at this, it's a pretty good and confident job!  

A few things to be improved:

1. Too dark in the bottom part of this photo. Her curves and legs almost hidden. It's good to make battleground darker, but not too dark.

2. Hand is bit too bright, kinda distracting form the face.

3. Logo! Way too big and bright :)