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Liliraune comic sketch page 7-11 (Patreon)

Published:
2020-06-08 18:13:54
Imported:
2021-03

Content

Here are new page sketch redraw some panel on page 7 too.

If you want to help with my awful grammar feel free to tell me in the comment.

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Anonymous

Marvellous!!

StarGazer

Page 8 "Looks like the more drinks, the more her body changes" "She is... kind of hot now... I hate it..." Page 11 "Do you mind backing off a bit?" "Hello? Earth to Anna?" But apart from those, it's looking amazing. Really love how Anna looks now XD

Arbiter

StarGazer got to the spell check first but I'm looking forward to how this will turn out!

Asani
>>38312561

I'll toss out my corrections for the sake of variety. Also, several places could use a comma. 7.3 Hey Anna, are you alright? 8.3 Looks like the more she drinks, the more her body changes. 8.4 She's...kinda hot...now. That pisses me off... 8.5 Why are you making her hotter, huh!? 9.1 Wha, what's happening!? 11.1.1 He...Hey...Anna. I like your new look. Green really suits you. 11.1.2 Do you mind back off bit... => You're getting awfully close... 11.1.3 Hello! Earth to Anna!

StarGazer
>>38313911

Sorry, I just had free time when it was posted. Though I'm sure I've missed a few out. XD

CrazedGamma1721

Will This Comic Be Coloured? Because I Love Where This Is Going.

Asani
>>38330561

For surzies~ These are just the rough layout sketches. Getting to see and comment on the development process is a nice Patreon perk.

Roxanne Giling

I always seem to be too late with my edits xD

RedeemerofDark

Man the only way this could be funnier is if the embarassed girl had heart eyes in response to getting seduced xD