Demon lord comic page 12 (Patreon)

Published:

2020-03-29 13:14:59

Imported:

2021-03

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Page 12 is here! Hope everyone stay safe and healthy. We live in intersting time people.

If you found any error or have a suggestion for dialouge feel free to tell me in the comment.

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StarGazer

It’s looking amazing. Love the combination of white and gold.

2020-03-29 13:17:12.481000

D Banks

Well damn so much for Holy armor guess he should not have gone in without a helmet

2020-03-29 14:08:00.463000

Anonymous

I take it the armor kind of solidifies and keeps him immobile in that state?

2020-03-29 14:18:28.205000

Stormfries

i looove it

2020-03-29 14:37:11.826000

Benjamin Lawton

Typos in the dialogue that I noticed (corrections in bold): Panel #1 (top-left): "It's a Demon Seed. Looks like your Holy Armor is trying to fight it. [...]" Panel #5 (Bottom-left): "[...] Next time you talk, I'll cut your tongue out."

2020-03-29 14:43:08.451000

Asani

>>34369832

“I’ll cut out your tongue.” is a more aggressive and correct phrasing. Could end the first panel with, “[...] How futile. Hehehe” or “Such futility. Hahaha”

2020-03-29 15:48:43.310000

Anonymous

>>34369832

"I'll cut out your tongue" is really more of a stylistic thing. "I'll cut your tongue out" makes her sound like she's calm and lecturing as to what's going to happen, rather than threatening or angry.

2020-03-29 23:15:55.005000