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EARLY ACCESS // clutter (Patreon)

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2022-11-25 12:07:08
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2023-01
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It’s been a while since I painted an interior scene! This is the finished version of the WIP I posted last month. I still feel like it’s missing something though! Like a pet or some storytelling element. What do you think? Any ideas on what I should add?

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Lion Art Studio

So cute… I’d have a dog, looking very guilty… with a shoe or other item in his mouth… maybe hiding behind the door.

Anonymous

I love this one

Anonymous

I think a judgmental cat would work in this scene.

Sophie Meyer

Yes, agree a cat or dog would be great that look guilty up at her 😂💜

Anonymous

A sparrow or a kitty would add something to the over all element, true but it’s a fun piece either way, real life done beautifully by you.

Anonymous

Love this! I can relate to this one too much. As much as I try to keep things organized, laundry is the bane of my existence, lol! It’d be interesting to see some sort of decal at the center of her shirt and maybe a bird or iguana (a bit of green might look nice here) on her shoulder, maybe another somewhere else? For me, when things get out of hand and super messy like that, I end up feeling trapped or "caged" by the clutter until I muster up the energy to organize it.

ellawy3

Well, you haven't posted a real-time video in a while. I wish you recorded this action🙏🥰

Anonymous

Two closets and it still looks like this. The atmosphere is good, but, strangely, my eye wants to put a mirror between the two doors. Probably just me.

Alexandria Kala Akins

I have been called out in this art XD Lovely work Loish!

Anonymous

I thought a lil cat, but I love it as it is. It looks like my ADHD. She's clearly got a lot on her mind, I don't think it needs anything else. Powerful <3

Anonymous

Why did you draw my life?! 🤣 maybe you could redraw one of her shoes off like she’s looking for it and hide it somewhere.

Anonymous

love the feelng on this. This is everybody at some point. Overwelmed. Paralized. Stuck. Really like the softer colours on the leg/arm that's far from us, and the combination of warm and cold colorurs.

Anonymous

Thought I was seeing myself… lol. I love how the emotion of the artwork is not lost on all the details.

Lauri Panopoulos Lauridesign.com

I don't think there is any thing missing, but if you want to push the story further, what do think about something that clues us into why the room is cluttered?

Anonymous

As far as storytelling…. It’d be cool to see like, her significant other, in the open doorway just looking at her as she stands in the clutter, kind of there to feel her pain from afar

Anonymous
>>96327830

Not just you, I was also wondering if one door was a reflection for a moment.

Anonymous

She currently makes me think of someone, who was looking for that one favourite item and after pulling out everything from its shelves, still couldn't find it. I am not sure if that was intended. Personally I would like to see the decal on her shirt be a little less simplified. It's such a comparatively big round space, that it always distracts my eyes away from looking at her face.

Loish
>>96460089

that storyline is indeed what I'm going for! I myself have been that person many times haha

Anonymous

If I were to add to the storyline... maybe a dog with a sock in his mouth that kind of shows how he made a mess of everything? I personally have come home to a complete disaster from my pups and have experienced this girl's same emotions. Lol

Anonymous

Definitely a cat laying on the clothes super comfy so it’s just making this task that much more difficult lol. I love the relatability of this post and the use of colors. The lightest white color sets the scene so well. I love all the fun details.

Anonymous

Maybe just closing her eyes...It will make the scene look like someone who's struggling to keep things neat. I've recently watched the excellent TED talk "How to do laundry when you're depressed" (KC Davis) and it reminds me of it

Loish
>>97405957

i was aiming for a bit of a hopeless vibe, i'm glad that it came across!

Divi (Lovewin)

Wow it's finished ! It loosk so good. I'm sad, since i missed all my patreon posts this year due to my phone acting up