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Tim Johnson

This whole part is just a little redundant " Zach looked over the papers on the table in front of him. The reports and statistics about crime in Emaros city dating back to last twelve years. His original research had shown that the number of murders in the city had doubled two years ago but since then he had found some... interesting things dating back almost twelve years back." doubled down on the twelve years, and the whole structure just feels awkward.

Jamarr

"Not enough yet, not yet, note yet" -> not yet