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The start of a new volume, you will notice that not much is changing, you will still get Ryun chapters and so on... A quick note, awhile ago I had a discussion about the economy in the Infinite Realm with someone on RoyalRoad, I saw some of their points and I reworked the economy a bit since then. Most of what I said about the economy has been through comments outside of the story. Starting with this chapter, you will learn more about it. So if you read something that is a bit inconsistent with what you read before, the reason is that I've changed how things work a bit. There shouldn't be any issues as I haven't touched upon anything really in depth inside the story so far and the changes aren't that drastic. And I doubt that everyone reads my comments ?

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Tim Johnson

"Their practice fights weren’t all one sides" should be one sided, "Emerah was a weapons master, he knew how to fight with almost every weapon. And he was even better than Zach at swordplay." this whole sequence could use some updating, should not start a stand alone sentence with an and, and you could probably fix it all up to one compound sentence. " some else" should be someone else. "the bounty that he and Griss took care for the" missing an of. "fraction of them is successful" are successful. "most of they young" them. ty for the chapter, looking forward to the coming tournament arc :D

Thaabit Rivertree

Good chapter, but... That's such an overpowered perk for Zach. I mean I guess you are trying to level the playing field so he can match Ryun? But it seems unrealistically overpowered, like the weapon version of plot armor. If he gets a unique perk like this, wouldn't Ryun get something overpowered for being the cause of the end of a world? It kind of feels like Ryun is working hard for his power bit by bit while Zach just gets handed the best perk in the realm. All the knowledge, talent and sword expertise that ever existed, doubled stats, reduced stamina reqs and cooldowns, 5x learning speed? I thought Zach's advantage would be the power/heritage of a powerful historic organization, the citadel books, guidance of the wardens. Maybe some of that would be special / elevated access or some other extra things thrown in here and there. This just seems too overpowered, at least when given all at once.

Joel Wells

I have a question. How old were Zack and Ryan when the framework came to earth and how old were they when it ended?

ivankal

Don't worry, it's not nearly as overpowered as you think it is. And it is a power spike perk for Classers, Ryun isn't a Classer so he can't get anything like that, Path Perks go in a different direction and he does have overpowered perks as well. But on the note of Zach, his perk gives him knowledge from people that never had powers, who didn't master fighting against different races or monsters. Their sword fighting was designed for fighting against other humans with weapons they knew, and the relatively same attributes. So not that overpowered. You also don't know how long it lasts yet, and reduction isn't even close to what Reyla has or what Eerv can do with his Reset.

ivankal

They were early twenties, Framework on Earth lasted for 10 years, so they are in their early thirties. Their stats and advancement makes them age a bit slower, so they look like they are in mid to late twenties.