Hands Free Beta (Old Story) (Patreon)

Sorry about the delay in schedule, but I’ll have the next 2 stories out by tomorrow! 😇

 
I’m really excited to have produced this video, it was a lot of work so please let me know any and all thoughts! I’ll admit, it’s basically the first video I’ve edited, so all critiques are more than welcome- in fact, I’m demanding them! 😅

This is a shorter story so I figured it wouldnt be as time consuming, but it’s already an existent story. My plan is to do this with all future stories, so please let me know any way to make the experience better!  Is the wait time per slide too long? Too short? More gifs? Less, etc…

Just please give me feedback, if it’s perfect- then tell me! 🥰

Link:https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRrcBYOxrtn8rkVwyhgHPLO16mduIKdPYd8cuafYNaQJHkCQLLAXicuq3X2l2X1rDc0Rx_IBQkfMrDk/pub